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jsmithson
critique "We Real Cool" 2 Page Short Script - feedback requested
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critique Feedback for my screenplay
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critique Iā€™m shooting this soon. Tell me what you think!
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critique 3 Different Moments From My Project - Whispers From Beyond (college project)
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sfoster
critique 1-Page drama seeking critique
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critique Blessings Pilot - 29 Pages - Urban Fantasy Pilot
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critique Opening scene of "A Bit."
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critique Any General critique
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critique Looking for feedback on this animated Script Idea - The Adamant- 32 pages
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critique Feedback needed for opening scene of my newest Screenplay.
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mlesemann
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critique Criticism much needed
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critique I really need feedback on my screenplay. It's only a few pages
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Nate North
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critique TV show.
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critique Anomalies - First 7 pages of feature film idea - would appreciate feedback.
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Unknown Screenwriter
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critique Mars scene.
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critique Exposition feedback
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critique "On a Whim" (4 Pages) - Screenplay - Feedback much much needed
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critique The Orca - 15 page Short Film - First time writing something supernatural/mystery? How successful has it been and how can I improve further?
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sfoster
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critique The King - 15 Page Script - Feedback Appreciated
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critique Vanishing Point (15 pages) - Sci Fi Short Film - looking for feedback and advice on how to improve
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critique Exposition.
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critique How to write an alien ship taking someone hostage/ disappearing someone?
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mlesemann
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critique Working on something new, Is it worth continuing?
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Nate North
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critique reworked a scene of mine, could i get an idea on its quality? 3 pages
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mlesemann
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critique Writing a scene, could i get a review on how it is so far? 3 pages
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critique I wrote story premise but I don't know if it's worth developing need critiques. ~1700 word overview of a story
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critique Looking for feedback on a short film script I wrote titled We Don't Talk about Eddie- 9 page drama, suspense.
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critique Mercury (Animated Pilot - 25 Pages) (Would love feedback - first attempt at trying to really write this year)
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JMathews
critique High School Scripts ā€œAnyoneā€
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critique White Night - a short Screenplay for Feedback
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critique The Time Traveler - 8-page sci-fi screenplay for feedback
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mlesemann
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critique Bach in jail
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critique NUBARIUM - 1/2 Hour Animated TV Pilot (Would Love Feedback!)
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critique Talk about this scene
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critique Short script
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critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts
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critique The next bit.
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critique A bit
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critique First page of first screenplay
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critique A TV show teaser.
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gspbatman
critique A Drop of Honey - A 6 page short script I'd like some critique on
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Constantin
critique Critique for a new HORROR movie outline - INNER SANCTUM
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jsmithson
critique Motormouth, a short script Iā€™d appreciate critique on
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critique Friendly Spirits, a short 2 page script ā€“ any critique appreciated
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critique I wrote my first short film script, I NEED Critiques!
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greenboard
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critique Dan's Shadow - a screenplay for review and feedback
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critique Untitled 1930s Lovecraftian/mystery/horror/comedy web episode. 10 pages
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critique What do you guys think of my first 10 pages?
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critique Could someone tell me what they think of my script?
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critique American Star (Drama, Full Length)
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critique Feedback Addiction
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critique I wrote this a couple of months ago, please critique.
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greenboard
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critique First Ten
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critique Could someone read and review first 3 pages my script?
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critique Could someone read and review my script?
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Constantin
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critique Critique on a short film script.
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BenjaminW
critique Looking for feedback on hard boiled/detective screenplay: Traceless
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critique Try this on for size; ON 'E" spec.
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critique dissecting my short screenplay
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critique Looking for some feedback - first 10 pages of my screenplay
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critique High-Octane Thrill-Ride, but grounded in reality. Feedback welcome.
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sfoster
critique Lily Fire (Screenplay)
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maggy03
critique [FEEDBACK] Super Salaam! | Drama, Comedy | 103 Pages.
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critique Opening to a road trip thriller
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critique The Dark Site - First Act
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critique 9 Page Children's Fantasy (Witches)
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critique First 15 pages of Feature
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critique Super Short
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critique ā€œTickā€ (Short/Drama/7 Pages)
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critique 5 page short drama
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critique 3 page absurd comedy on retail investment
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critique 30 page script. Disclamier: topic of suicide and death examined.
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critique Feedback on a 6 pages fantastic short film about the afterlife
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critique Need review on pilot of my new series
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critique Feedback for screenplay outline wanted.
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critique First 6 Pages of my script -Pulling Weeds
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critique Looking for feedback on a short film (thriller/drama) i wrote
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critique Short Script Feedback
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critique Feedback please! (6 pages)
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critique Looking for feedback "Untitled Road Trip Film" (40 pages)
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mlesemann
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critique I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback on this Film Adaptation
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jsmithson
critique BackTrack Short Script critique requested
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critique Feedback needed
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ShortFilmSensei
critique Infinitus Short SciFi Script Feedback
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critique Ziu, the lonely andriod - Feedback on Short sci-fi drama
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critique My horror movie idea (Yah! I know I have to write but I need critique first.)
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