critique I’m shooting this soon. Tell me what you think!

[willtryit]

Hey Gang,
I’ve been writing this for 2 year, i am shooting it in about 2 weeks. I love it but am open to critiques. Please tell me what you think of the story!

 

[Chris Tempel]

If you love it, that's the most important part. Good luck and have fun! Be sure to share the film here when it's done and share some behind the scenes