critique Looking for feedback "Untitled Road Trip Film" (40 pages)

[OscarGray]

This is my second screenplay I have written and this is the first draft. It's story i been kicking around, looking feedback on how i can improve the story. Sorry for typos and bad grammar, hope to fix that on the next drafts.

Untitled-Road-Trip-Film.pdf

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[mlesemann]

You'll get (many) more responses if you just upload & ask people to read the first 10 pages.