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dialogue Critique of a short comedy

Hey folks...Here's a short comedy script I am about to hand over to a friend who will turn it into a neat animatic. I think a very cheap short film can be made out of it to!

Any comments or suggests on how to improve my dialogue are always welcome
 

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