Hi all,
I'm looking for feedback on the pilot for my dark hard boiled detective tv show: Traceless.
It has adult themes throughout and is looking to add to the genre consisting of programs such as: Mindhunter/True Detective/American Gods/The Wire etc.
I've had feedback from family and friends but now I would really like some feedback from other writers if possible?
A quick two line overview: A young woman is found dead in the Wyoming wastelands naked and bound to a stool whilst holding a bishop chess piece. With no obvious leads, follow Detectives' Davids and Roberts down the rabbit hole.
Any feedback is gratefully received and will be taken on board to improve my writing.
Thanks all,
Ben
I'm looking for feedback on the pilot for my dark hard boiled detective tv show: Traceless.
It has adult themes throughout and is looking to add to the genre consisting of programs such as: Mindhunter/True Detective/American Gods/The Wire etc.
I've had feedback from family and friends but now I would really like some feedback from other writers if possible?
A quick two line overview: A young woman is found dead in the Wyoming wastelands naked and bound to a stool whilst holding a bishop chess piece. With no obvious leads, follow Detectives' Davids and Roberts down the rabbit hole.
Any feedback is gratefully received and will be taken on board to improve my writing.
Thanks all,
Ben