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critique Blessings Pilot - 29 Pages - Urban Fantasy Pilot

Logline: A runaway fends for his life against supernatural forces who seek to eliminate him before he can achieve his destiny. Link to script:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1VUqvTiS1xxtH0GwAOQujkX27Txa4Eq4_/view?usp=sharing
1. Do I have a clear conflict?
2. Does my main character have a character arc? Are my characters compelling? (Not sure how possible this is in a short)
3. How is my dialogue?
4. Is the concept interesting in your opinion?
Thank you for taking the time to read through and give me feedback.