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Screenwriting
A Q&A for all aspects of screenwriting.
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screenplay (73)
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Unknown Screenwriter
Jan 11, 2021
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Nov 24, 2023
sfoster
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Is this something decent?
New22
Yesterday at 8:46 PM
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94
Yesterday at 8:46 PM
New22
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Help with my murder mystery comedy screenplay
ishaanranderia
Wednesday at 2:56 PM
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87
Wednesday at 2:56 PM
ishaanranderia
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screenplay
Rapid movement
Smaragd
Oct 18, 2023
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5
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530
Monday at 8:25 AM
LindaRiv12pt
format
The End of Formatting work
Nate North
Sep 28, 2023
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13
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833
Saturday at 3:07 PM
James Rogers
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screenplay
What are typical lengths of successful screenplays?
Traveller
Jul 30, 2023
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545
Nov 24, 2023
LindaRiv12pt
software
celtx cursor moves erratically
Stabby McKillaguy
Oct 17, 2023
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352
Nov 24, 2023
LindaRiv12pt
logline
Help me with the logline
absurdworld
Oct 28, 2023
2
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20
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791
Nov 16, 2023
James Rogers
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software
Screenwriting software
therealbillmurray
Nov 2, 2020
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12
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2K
Nov 10, 2023
iMovieShout
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screenplay
how would i find a screenwriter for a New Indie Film
treefrog
Nov 5, 2023
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393
Nov 6, 2023
directorik
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critique
Looking for feedback on this animated Script Idea - The Adamant- 32 pages
scrawlx1012
Nov 4, 2023
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241
Nov 4, 2023
scrawlx1012
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"Shutter Island" Opening Sequence 🚢
absurdworld
Oct 30, 2023
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339
Oct 31, 2023
absurdworld
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Feedback needed for opening scene of my newest Screenplay.
Ronin437
Oct 27, 2023
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7
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412
Oct 27, 2023
mlesemann
screenplay
Voice v Structure
Spike
Sep 28, 2023
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7
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650
Oct 11, 2023
Unknown Screenwriter
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Criticism much needed
willtryit
Sep 23, 2023
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12
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736
Sep 27, 2023
CelticRambler
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Opening scene of "A Bit."
Spike
Aug 15, 2022
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11
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2K
Sep 27, 2023
Nate North
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I really need feedback on my screenplay. It's only a few pages
Ronin437
Sep 25, 2023
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548
Sep 27, 2023
Nate North
software
Freeform for Brainstorming and Outlining
Chris Tempel
Sep 3, 2023
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3
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473
Sep 4, 2023
Chris Tempel
critique
TV show.
Spike
Aug 20, 2023
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719
Sep 3, 2023
Nate North
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Anomalies - First 7 pages of feature film idea - would appreciate feedback.
scrawlx1012
Aug 19, 2023
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5
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597
Aug 20, 2023
Unknown Screenwriter
screenplay
Formatting Google search
Smaragd
Aug 19, 2023
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3
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551
Aug 19, 2023
mlesemann
dialogue
Thoughts on VO narration?
ProductionBlues
Nov 13, 2022
2
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3K
Aug 15, 2023
sfoster
critique
Mars scene.
Spike
Aug 11, 2023
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4
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616
Aug 12, 2023
Spike
critique
Exposition feedback
Spike
Aug 7, 2023
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12
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840
Aug 10, 2023
Spike
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What do you think of this violent mystery thriller drama movie of mine?
Rain69
Aug 8, 2023
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407
Aug 8, 2023
Rain69
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How can I further develop this supernatural horror movie of mine?
Rain69
Aug 4, 2023
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512
Aug 4, 2023
Unknown Screenwriter
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"On a Whim" (4 Pages) - Screenplay - Feedback much much needed
Ronin437
Aug 3, 2023
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621
Aug 3, 2023
Ronin437
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The Orca - 15 page Short Film - First time writing something supernatural/mystery? How successful has it been and how can I improve further?
scrawlx1012
Jul 24, 2023
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6
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624
Aug 2, 2023
sfoster
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critique
The King - 15 Page Script - Feedback Appreciated
scrawlx1012
Aug 2, 2023
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0
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394
Aug 2, 2023
scrawlx1012
S
critique
I Hear You - short story to screenplay (WIP)
river123
Jul 29, 2023
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2
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400
Jul 30, 2023
river123
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plot
Takings bits and pieces here and there.
Aspiring Mogul
Jul 23, 2023
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8
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550
Jul 24, 2023
mlesemann
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Vanishing Point (15 pages) - Sci Fi Short Film - looking for feedback and advice on how to improve
scrawlx1012
Jul 15, 2023
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5
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985
Jul 19, 2023
Spike
critique
Exposition.
Spike
Jul 15, 2023
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0
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388
Jul 15, 2023
Spike
misc
About Coverfly
Fabrizzio Lerma
Jul 9, 2023
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4
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545
Jul 13, 2023
mlesemann
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critique
How to write an alien ship taking someone hostage/ disappearing someone?
scrawlx1012
Jul 7, 2023
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3
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466
Jul 7, 2023
Spike
critique
Asking for Criticism
BLOB
Jun 17, 2023
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9
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761
Jun 29, 2023
mlesemann
S
misc
Best course of action - writing for animation that I will realistically not produce or write for live action e.g shorts?
scrawlx1012
Jun 22, 2023
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2
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451
Jun 23, 2023
Nate North
critique
First page
Spike
Jun 17, 2023
2
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28
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1K
Jun 22, 2023
Spike
character
Friendo
Spike
Jun 19, 2023
2
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35
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1K
Jun 20, 2023
Spike
screenplay
The Soft Parade (101 pgs. sci-fi/action/drama): Looking for feedback
Tnchinton3
Jun 20, 2023
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0
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381
Jun 20, 2023
Tnchinton3
screenplay
New JSB sequence
Spike
Jun 18, 2023
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2
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518
Jun 18, 2023
Spike
screenplay
Should I put it in action or parenthical line?
spanielkoffa
Jun 14, 2023
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7
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532
Jun 17, 2023
Spike
screenplay
Telephone call in a script
spanielkoffa
Jun 16, 2023
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6
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738
Jun 17, 2023
Spike
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critique
Working on something new, Is it worth continuing?
New22
Jun 14, 2023
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10
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575
Jun 14, 2023
Nate North
screenplay
What does this period mean in a screenplay?
spanielkoffa
Jun 12, 2023
Answers
1
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452
Jun 12, 2023
spanielkoffa
dialogue
Do I format my dialogues correctly?
spanielkoffa
Jun 9, 2023
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17
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909
Jun 12, 2023
spanielkoffa
misc
Why do TV shows keep attention better?
sfoster
Apr 11, 2023
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6
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107
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4K
Jun 1, 2023
sfoster
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screenplay
Is my scene going well?
New22
May 22, 2023
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4
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580
May 22, 2023
New22
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action
How to write a scene where two characters are hiding from another? How to write clear and concise action lines?
scrawlx1012
May 14, 2023
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15
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1K
May 22, 2023
CelticRambler
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reworked a scene of mine, could i get an idea on its quality? 3 pages
New22
May 6, 2023
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1
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584
May 7, 2023
mlesemann
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critique
Thoughts on my Sci Fi Pilot? How can I make the audience care about characters in the first few pages?
scrawlx1012
May 3, 2023
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2
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585
May 3, 2023
mlesemann
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screenplay
Before Sunrise--Inspiration
JohnAndrews
May 1, 2023
Answers
1
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556
May 1, 2023
mlesemann
misc
Speculative vs. Shooting Scripts: What Purpose Does Each Serve in the Filmmaking Process?
Unknown Screenwriter
May 1, 2023
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0
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521
May 1, 2023
Unknown Screenwriter
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critique
Writing a scene, could i get a review on how it is so far? 3 pages
New22
Apr 29, 2023
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4
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713
Apr 30, 2023
New22
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critique
I wrote story premise but I don't know if it's worth developing need critiques. ~1700 word overview of a story
jeffthepie
Feb 24, 2023
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7
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927
Apr 29, 2023
Aspiring Mogul
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misc
Why is Hollywood Ditching Its Rule of "Show, Don't Tell"?
Unknown Screenwriter
Dec 11, 2022
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11
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1K
Apr 26, 2023
Constantin
J
critique
Looking for feedback on a short film script I wrote titled We Don't Talk about Eddie- 9 page drama, suspense.
Joe-Flynn
Apr 22, 2023
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4
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712
Apr 22, 2023
indietalk
S
critique
Mercury (Animated Pilot - 25 Pages) (Would love feedback - first attempt at trying to really write this year)
scrawlx1012
Apr 5, 2023
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0
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721
Apr 5, 2023
scrawlx1012
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story
This is taking forever
Nate North
Feb 14, 2023
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3
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54
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3K
Apr 2, 2023
Aspiring Mogul
A
plot
God in the Machine
sfoster
Mar 29, 2023
Answers
1
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625
Mar 30, 2023
mlesemann
J
screenplay
"Running Loose" (~8 pages) - These are my first pages so feedback is REALLY appreciated.
jeffthepie
Mar 27, 2023
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4
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766
Mar 27, 2023
jeffthepie
J
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story
Throw away ideas, that can turn into a story
Dean Jay
Nov 23, 2022
2
3
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56
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4K
Mar 11, 2023
Nate North
treatment
ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment
Constantin
Mar 4, 2023
2
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29
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2K
Mar 9, 2023
Constantin
logline
Loglines
Spike
Dec 19, 2022
2
3
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53
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3K
Mar 9, 2023
Spike
misc
Any Alternatives to readthrough.com?
Chris Tempel
Mar 5, 2023
Answers
1
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779
Mar 6, 2023
mlesemann
logline
Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...
Constantin
Mar 4, 2023
2
3
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41
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2K
Mar 4, 2023
indietalk
story
High concept vs Low concept
James Rogers
Feb 12, 2023
Answers
12
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1K
Feb 15, 2023
James Rogers
misc
American Highschools
sfoster
Jan 30, 2023
2
Answers
20
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2K
Feb 3, 2023
indietalk
treatment
What I learned from the frustration of (re-)writing 2 page treatments
mlesemann
Mar 31, 2021
2
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23
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3K
Jan 28, 2023
mlesemann
screenplay
"Pledge" Advanced for High School Directors.
JMathews
Jan 28, 2023
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0
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677
Jan 28, 2023
JMathews
A
screenplay
Ideas for 5 min short
ashton.sinclair2005
Jan 19, 2023
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2
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791
Jan 21, 2023
JMathews
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logline
Logline feedback for a drama, please and thank you
Hallucigenia
Sep 17, 2022
Answers
15
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2K
Jan 21, 2023
JMathews
screenplay
Humans (+1): Hope`s Heart - publishing screenplay as book
EssaHumans
Jan 19, 2023
Answers
5
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878
Jan 21, 2023
JMathews
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story
Crafting a Scene: Standup in a Prison Colony
Scroll Troll
Jan 17, 2023
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1
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678
Jan 17, 2023
sfoster
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How do I make money from screenwriting? Is there a program or course I can take that tells me how to make “real money” without the fluff?
Fasterthanlight
Apr 3, 2022
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18
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3K
Jan 16, 2023
EssaHumans
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misc
Does anyone know of any 1960s/1970s gore/shlock film scripts online?
Hallucigenia
Jan 14, 2023
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2
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795
Jan 15, 2023
Hallucigenia
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F
screenplay
what is a beat in scriptwriting?
freedom crusader
Jan 9, 2023
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5
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944
Jan 13, 2023
James Rogers
F
screenplay
A handful of queries sent out...
freedom crusader
Jan 11, 2023
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0
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539
Jan 11, 2023
freedom crusader
F
dialogue
Dialogue and discontinuity of time
James Rogers
Jan 6, 2023
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5
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870
Jan 7, 2023
indietalk
F
screenplay
negotiating payment for a script
freedom crusader
Jan 5, 2023
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2
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783
Jan 5, 2023
directorik
screenplay
"Perfect" A High School Script - Production level easy
JMathews
Jan 2, 2023
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2
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684
Jan 4, 2023
JMathews
D
story
Page 1
Dean Jay
Dec 13, 2022
Answers
14
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1K
Jan 4, 2023
Iren
I
story
It was all just a Dream
Nate North
Oct 25, 2022
2
Answers
35
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2K
Jan 3, 2023
Iren
I
I
plot
Crescendo
Iren
Dec 30, 2022
Answers
8
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941
Jan 1, 2023
Iren
I
plot
Assassin School for Girls
sfoster
Jul 3, 2020
2
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23
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5K
Jan 1, 2023
Iren
I
T
Solved
screenplay
How can i write scripts like this?
TalismanTales
Dec 30, 2022
Answers
1
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883
Dec 31, 2022
Unknown Screenwriter
critique
High School Scripts “Anyone”
JMathews
Dec 28, 2022
Answers
2
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732
Dec 28, 2022
JMathews
R
critique
White Night - a short Screenplay for Feedback
Ronen
Dec 23, 2022
Answers
10
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1K
Dec 27, 2022
Ronen
R
R
critique
The Time Traveler - 8-page sci-fi screenplay for feedback
Ronen
Dec 25, 2022
Answers
1
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777
Dec 25, 2022
mlesemann
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logline
Logline for a steampunk thriller
Hallucigenia
Dec 14, 2022
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19
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1K
Dec 23, 2022
freedom crusader
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critique
Logline review
NormWel
Sep 30, 2022
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11
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1K
Dec 22, 2022
Spike
critique
Bach in jail
Spike
Dec 11, 2022
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10
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1K
Dec 16, 2022
Spike
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action
Action vs Parenthetical
Phil123456789
Aug 29, 2022
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6
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1K
Nov 19, 2022
ExpatTraveler2
story
Maps of Meaning
Alcove Audio
Jul 26, 2020
2
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38
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5K
Nov 19, 2022
ExpatTraveler2
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NUBARIUM - 1/2 Hour Animated TV Pilot (Would Love Feedback!)
marcthenarc
Oct 24, 2022
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3
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1K
Nov 18, 2022
James Rogers
screenplay
Chekhov's gun in the modern era
Nate North
Apr 6, 2022
2
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29
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3K
Nov 14, 2022
CelticRambler
C
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Kurzdrehbuch zum Massensterben in Itaewon Südkorea (Halloween 2022)
The StoryTelLer
Nov 4, 2022
Answers
0
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697
Nov 4, 2022
The StoryTelLer
screenplay
Rich and Poor: ist Armut Genetik? (German Screenplay)
The StoryTelLer
Oct 29, 2022
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2
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830
Nov 1, 2022
The StoryTelLer
screenplay
Halloween Screenplay ++ Black Story ++ 2 pages
The StoryTelLer
Oct 31, 2022
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0
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813
Oct 31, 2022
The StoryTelLer
screenplay
Funny little Halloween Screenplay
The StoryTelLer
Oct 26, 2022
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0
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710
Oct 26, 2022
The StoryTelLer
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Talk about this scene
Dean Jay
Oct 24, 2022
Answers
16
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976
Oct 25, 2022
Nate North
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