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critique Logline review

Answers: 8

Views: 270

Saturday at 12:35 AM

NormWel

critique More

Answers: 11

Views: 512

Sep 26, 2022

Nate North

critique WORK IN PROGRESS scripts

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Answers: 83

Views: 9K

Sep 23, 2022

Nate North

critique The next bit.

Answers: 19

Views: 602

Sep 22, 2022

Spike

critique Opening scene of "A Bit."

Answers: 9

Views: 567

Aug 17, 2022

Nate North

critique A bit

Answers: 9

Views: 482

Jul 28, 2022

Spike

critique Help with an adaptation

Answers: 13

Views: 753

Jun 20, 2022

krishnasarma

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critique First page of first screenplay

Answers: 11

Views: 1K

Jun 20, 2022

krishnasarma

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critique LETHAL ATTRACTION (would like feedback on this story)

Answers: 10

Views: 1K

Mar 11, 2022

Bean Counter

critique A TV show teaser.

Answers: 2

Views: 818

Feb 28, 2022

Spike

critique A Drop of Honey - A 6 page short script I'd like some critique on

Answers: 2

Views: 721

Dec 13, 2021

gspbatman

critique Critique for a new HORROR movie outline - INNER SANCTUM

Answers: 0

Views: 506

Nov 30, 2021

Constantin

critique Motormouth, a short script I’d appreciate critique on

Answers: 1

Views: 530

Nov 8, 2021

mlesemann

critique Friendly Spirits, a short 2 page script – any critique appreciated

Answers: 6

Views: 2K

Oct 11, 2021

jsmithson

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critique I wrote my first short film script, I NEED Critiques!

Answers: 0

Views: 436

Oct 4, 2021

UchLove

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critique First 10 pages TV pilot

Answers: 7

Views: 1K

Sep 23, 2021

Unknown Screenwriter

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critique Dan's Shadow - a screenplay for review and feedback

Answers: 12

Views: 1K

Aug 16, 2021

indietalk

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critique Untitled 1930s Lovecraftian/mystery/horror/comedy web episode. 10 pages

Answers: 0

Views: 427

Aug 13, 2021

Outside

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critique 5 page Script

Answers: 3

Views: 1K

Aug 4, 2021

CelticRambler

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critique Middle Eastern Punk - a script to review and give feedback on

Answers: 1

Views: 569

Jun 4, 2021

Unknown Screenwriter

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critique What do you guys think of my first 10 pages?

Answers: 2

Views: 545

May 26, 2021

Lucky Hardwood

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critique Could someone tell me what they think of my script?

Answers: 4

Views: 846

May 25, 2021

StoneJack

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critique a

Answers: 0

Views: 560

May 1, 2021

guywhowrites27

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critique American Star (Drama, Full Length)

Answers: 0

Views: 543

Apr 28, 2021

robert-timsah

critique Feedback Addiction

Answers: 0

Views: 644

Apr 28, 2021

robert-timsah

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critique I wrote this a couple of months ago, please critique.

Answers: 16

Views: 1K

Apr 13, 2021

Bluelight

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critique First 10 pages

Answers: 0

Views: 574

Mar 13, 2021

greenboard

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critique First Ten

Answers: 4

Views: 572

Mar 11, 2021

CelticRambler

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critique Could someone read and review first 3 pages my script?

Answers: 8

Views: 769

Mar 9, 2021

CelticRambler

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critique Could someone read and review my script?

Answers: 13

Views: 809

Mar 9, 2021

CelticRambler

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critique Critique for my short film script

Answers: 15

Views: 2K

Jan 17, 2021

PageBlaster

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critique Critique on a short film script.

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Answers: 21

Views: 4K

Dec 21, 2020

mrjbird

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critique Looking for feedback on hard boiled/detective screenplay: Traceless

Answers: 6

Views: 1K

Dec 20, 2020

Constantin

critique Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story

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Answers: 27

Views: 3K

Nov 24, 2020

Constantin

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critique Try this on for size; ON 'E" spec.

Answers: 8

Views: 1K

Nov 16, 2020

Unknown Screenwriter

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critique dissecting my short screenplay

Answers: 7

Views: 1K

Oct 30, 2020

Unknown Screenwriter

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critique Looking for some feedback - first 10 pages of my screenplay

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Answers: 21

Views: 4K

Oct 25, 2020

Serpinitha

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critique High-Octane Thrill-Ride, but grounded in reality. Feedback welcome.

2 3

Answers: 54

Views: 5K

Oct 4, 2020

Rick_Leuce

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critique Lily Fire (Screenplay)

2

Answers: 28

Views: 4K

Sep 30, 2020

Unknown Screenwriter

critique [FEEDBACK] Super Salaam! | Drama, Comedy | 103 Pages.

Answers: 5

Views: 920

Aug 26, 2020

Unknown Screenwriter

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critique Opening to a road trip thriller

Answers: 2

Views: 727

Aug 25, 2020

Maxsdad

critique advice/feedback - first steps into the story

Answers: 14

Views: 1K

Aug 5, 2020

susanrainter

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critique The Dark Site - First Act

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Answers: 24

Views: 3K

Jul 20, 2020

sfoster

critique 9 Page Children's Fantasy (Witches)

Answers: 10

Views: 1K

Jul 1, 2020

StoneJack

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critique First 15 pages of Feature

Answers: 4

Views: 761

Jun 30, 2020

Ollie

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critique Super Short

Answers: 3

Views: 556

Jun 24, 2020

Unknown Screenwriter

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critique “Tick” (Short/Drama/7 Pages)

Answers: 3

Views: 520

Jun 19, 2020

StoneJack

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critique 5 page short drama

Answers: 6

Views: 976

May 19, 2020

Jkds

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critique 3 page absurd comedy on retail investment

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Answers: 24

Views: 2K

May 14, 2020

Drowynaut55

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critique 30 page script. Disclamier: topic of suicide and death examined.

Answers: 3

Views: 685

May 14, 2020

Drowynaut55

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critique Feedback on a 6 pages fantastic short film about the afterlife

Answers: 4

Views: 1K

May 14, 2020

Drowynaut55

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critique Need review on pilot of my new series

Answers: 0

Views: 399

May 13, 2020

hustlebuslte

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critique Feedback for screenplay outline wanted.

Answers: 11

Views: 1K

May 10, 2020

Jadeb28

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critique First 6 Pages of my script -Pulling Weeds

Answers: 8

Views: 1K

May 7, 2020

Jkds

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critique I would love honest feedback on this synopsis

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Answers: 21

Views: 3K

May 6, 2020

StoneJack

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critique Looking for feedback on a short film (thriller/drama) i wrote

Answers: 2

Views: 945

May 6, 2020

StoneJack

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critique Short Script Feedback

Answers: 3

Views: 1K

May 5, 2020

Ollie

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critique Feedback please! (6 pages)

Answers: 1

Views: 579

Apr 22, 2020

Ollie

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critique Looking for feedback "Untitled Road Trip Film" (40 pages)

Answers: 1

Views: 632

Feb 6, 2020

mlesemann

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critique I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback on this Film Adaptation

Answers: 8

Views: 912

Jan 22, 2020

indietalk

critique BackTrack Short Script critique requested

2

Answers: 23

Views: 3K

Dec 17, 2019

Geezer

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critique Feedback needed

Answers: 3

Views: 931

Dec 9, 2019

CelticRambler

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critique Short Script

2

Answers: 32

Views: 3K

Nov 18, 2019

CelticRambler

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critique Infinitus Short SciFi Script Feedback

Answers: 6

Views: 1K

Oct 14, 2019

CamBlamo

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critique Ziu, the lonely andriod - Feedback on Short sci-fi drama

Answers: 4

Views: 1K

Sep 28, 2019

Jy_Bubb

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critique Inamorata - Short Thriller - 9 Pages

Answers: 3

Views: 939

Sep 20, 2019

clark ratliff

critique Post your films story here to receive feedback

Answers: 6

Views: 978

Sep 20, 2019

GOLDENMORAL CINEMAS

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critique "Project Dragon": Plot Feedback

Answers: 7

Views: 838

Sep 20, 2019

Razor-D-Belphe

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critique PRELUDIUM | Short film - Can you give your opinion?

Answers: 14

Views: 1K

Aug 29, 2019

mlesemann

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critique "Young Woman by the Window"

Answers: 5

Views: 802

Jul 29, 2019

TheMusicBox

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critique A Change of Pace - First 10

Answers: 0

Views: 936

Jul 16, 2019

stevencwood

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