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High School Scripts “Anyone”
JMathews
Dec 28, 2022
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Dec 28, 2022
JMathews
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White Night - a short Screenplay for Feedback
Ronen
Dec 23, 2022
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10
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567
Dec 27, 2022
Ronen
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The Time Traveler - 8-page sci-fi screenplay for feedback
Ronen
Dec 25, 2022
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1
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255
Dec 25, 2022
mlesemann
critique
Logline review
NormWel
Sep 30, 2022
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11
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722
Dec 22, 2022
Spike
critique
Bach in jail
Spike
Dec 11, 2022
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10
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532
Dec 16, 2022
Spike
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NUBARIUM - 1/2 Hour Animated TV Pilot (Would Love Feedback!)
marcthenarc
Oct 24, 2022
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3
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477
Nov 18, 2022
James Rogers
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Talk about this scene
Dean Jay
Oct 24, 2022
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16
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475
Oct 25, 2022
Nate North
critique
Short script
James Rogers
Oct 15, 2022
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18
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631
Oct 17, 2022
sfoster
critique
More
Spike
Sep 22, 2022
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11
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814
Sep 26, 2022
Nate North
critique
WORK IN PROGRESS scripts
clark ratliff
Sep 22, 2019
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Sep 23, 2022
Nate North
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The next bit.
Spike
Sep 10, 2022
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19
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837
Sep 22, 2022
Spike
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Opening scene of "A Bit."
Spike
Aug 15, 2022
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9
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761
Aug 17, 2022
Nate North
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A bit
Spike
Jul 26, 2022
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9
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667
Jul 28, 2022
Spike
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Help with an adaptation
Adeimantus
Jun 4, 2022
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1K
Jun 20, 2022
krishnasarma
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First page of first screenplay
krishnasarma
Jan 16, 2022
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Jun 20, 2022
krishnasarma
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LETHAL ATTRACTION (would like feedback on this story)
swedishdude
Nov 29, 2021
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10
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2K
Mar 11, 2022
Bean Counter
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A TV show teaser.
Spike
Feb 27, 2022
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2
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948
Feb 28, 2022
Spike
critique
A Drop of Honey - A 6 page short script I'd like some critique on
gspbatman
Nov 10, 2021
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858
Dec 13, 2021
gspbatman
critique
Critique for a new HORROR movie outline - INNER SANCTUM
Constantin
Nov 30, 2021
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607
Nov 30, 2021
Constantin
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Motormouth, a short script I’d appreciate critique on
jsmithson
Nov 8, 2021
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1
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619
Nov 8, 2021
mlesemann
critique
Friendly Spirits, a short 2 page script – any critique appreciated
jsmithson
Sep 23, 2021
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2K
Oct 11, 2021
jsmithson
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I wrote my first short film script, I NEED Critiques!
UchLove
Oct 4, 2021
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0
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512
Oct 4, 2021
UchLove
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First 10 pages TV pilot
greenboard
Sep 22, 2021
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7
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1K
Sep 23, 2021
Unknown Screenwriter
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Dan's Shadow - a screenplay for review and feedback
Ronen
Aug 15, 2021
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12
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1K
Aug 16, 2021
indietalk
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Untitled 1930s Lovecraftian/mystery/horror/comedy web episode. 10 pages
Outside
Aug 13, 2021
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499
Aug 13, 2021
Outside
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5 page Script
Ollie
Aug 2, 2021
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3
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1K
Aug 4, 2021
CelticRambler
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Middle Eastern Punk - a script to review and give feedback on
Ronen
Jun 4, 2021
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686
Jun 4, 2021
Unknown Screenwriter
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What do you guys think of my first 10 pages?
Brian9872
May 25, 2021
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2
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608
May 26, 2021
Lucky Hardwood
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Could someone tell me what they think of my script?
guywhowrites27
May 2, 2021
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4
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927
May 25, 2021
StoneJack
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guywhowrites27
May 1, 2021
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595
May 1, 2021
guywhowrites27
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American Star (Drama, Full Length)
robert-timsah
Apr 28, 2021
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0
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593
Apr 28, 2021
robert-timsah
critique
Feedback Addiction
robert-timsah
Apr 28, 2021
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0
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687
Apr 28, 2021
robert-timsah
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I wrote this a couple of months ago, please critique.
Bluelight
Apr 7, 2021
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16
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1K
Apr 13, 2021
Bluelight
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First 10 pages
greenboard
Mar 13, 2021
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0
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617
Mar 13, 2021
greenboard
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First Ten
Ollie
Mar 11, 2021
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4
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634
Mar 11, 2021
CelticRambler
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Could someone read and review first 3 pages my script?
Aditya08
Mar 9, 2021
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893
Mar 9, 2021
CelticRambler
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Could someone read and review my script?
guywhowrites12
Mar 8, 2021
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13
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881
Mar 9, 2021
CelticRambler
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Critique for my short film script
greenboard
Dec 22, 2020
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2K
Jan 17, 2021
PageBlaster
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Critique on a short film script.
mrjbird
Nov 22, 2020
2
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21
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4K
Dec 21, 2020
mrjbird
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Looking for feedback on hard boiled/detective screenplay: Traceless
BenjaminW
Nov 9, 2020
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6
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1K
Dec 20, 2020
Constantin
critique
Feedback - Plot Development for a Love Short Story
Constantin
Oct 16, 2020
2
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27
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3K
Nov 24, 2020
Constantin
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Try this on for size; ON 'E" spec.
OOWEE
Nov 8, 2020
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8
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1K
Nov 16, 2020
Unknown Screenwriter
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dissecting my short screenplay
dan360
Oct 30, 2020
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7
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1K
Oct 30, 2020
Unknown Screenwriter
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Looking for some feedback - first 10 pages of my screenplay
Jkds
May 7, 2020
2
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21
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4K
Oct 25, 2020
Serpinitha
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High-Octane Thrill-Ride, but grounded in reality. Feedback welcome.
Rick_Leuce
Jan 29, 2020
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5K
Oct 4, 2020
Rick_Leuce
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Lily Fire (Screenplay)
sfoster
Jul 10, 2020
2
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28
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4K
Sep 30, 2020
Unknown Screenwriter
critique
[FEEDBACK] Super Salaam! | Drama, Comedy | 103 Pages.
maggy03
Aug 21, 2020
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5
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973
Aug 26, 2020
Unknown Screenwriter
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Opening to a road trip thriller
stevencwood
Aug 22, 2020
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2
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782
Aug 25, 2020
Maxsdad
critique
advice/feedback - first steps into the story
susanrainter
Aug 1, 2020
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14
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1K
Aug 5, 2020
susanrainter
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The Dark Site - First Act
Jkds
Jul 16, 2020
2
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24
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3K
Jul 20, 2020
sfoster
critique
9 Page Children's Fantasy (Witches)
sfoster
Jun 26, 2020
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10
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1K
Jul 1, 2020
StoneJack
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First 15 pages of Feature
Ollie
Jun 29, 2020
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4
Views
816
Jun 30, 2020
Ollie
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O
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Super Short
Ollie
Jun 20, 2020
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3
Views
593
Jun 24, 2020
Unknown Screenwriter
J
critique
“Tick” (Short/Drama/7 Pages)
jwx
Jun 15, 2020
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3
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565
Jun 19, 2020
StoneJack
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J
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5 page short drama
Jkds
May 15, 2020
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6
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1K
May 19, 2020
Jkds
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3 page absurd comedy on retail investment
Ampersander
May 10, 2020
2
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24
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2K
May 14, 2020
Drowynaut55
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30 page script. Disclamier: topic of suicide and death examined.
Ollie
May 9, 2020
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3
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736
May 14, 2020
Drowynaut55
K
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Feedback on a 6 pages fantastic short film about the afterlife
Keekee
Feb 14, 2020
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4
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1K
May 14, 2020
Drowynaut55
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Need review on pilot of my new series
hustlebuslte
May 13, 2020
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0
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436
May 13, 2020
hustlebuslte
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Feedback for screenplay outline wanted.
Dr.Doom
Feb 11, 2020
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11
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1K
May 10, 2020
Jadeb28
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First 6 Pages of my script -Pulling Weeds
Ollie
May 2, 2020
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8
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1K
May 7, 2020
Jkds
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I would love honest feedback on this synopsis
VanillaThunder
Jan 18, 2020
2
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21
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3K
May 6, 2020
StoneJack
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C
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Looking for feedback on a short film (thriller/drama) i wrote
CJSaysThings
Feb 22, 2020
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2
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1K
May 6, 2020
StoneJack
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O
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Short Script Feedback
Ollie
Apr 20, 2020
Answers
3
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1K
May 5, 2020
Ollie
O
critique
Feedback please! (6 pages)
refai3096
Mar 27, 2020
Answers
1
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620
Apr 22, 2020
Ollie
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O
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Looking for feedback "Untitled Road Trip Film" (40 pages)
OscarGray
Feb 6, 2020
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1
Views
675
Feb 6, 2020
mlesemann
J
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I would greatly appreciate any and all feedback on this Film Adaptation
Jcohen
Jan 20, 2020
Answers
8
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982
Jan 22, 2020
indietalk
critique
BackTrack Short Script critique requested
jsmithson
Dec 13, 2019
2
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23
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3K
Dec 17, 2019
Geezer
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Feedback needed
OscarGray
Dec 8, 2019
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3
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979
Dec 9, 2019
CelticRambler
C
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Short Script
Geezer
Oct 15, 2019
2
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32
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3K
Nov 18, 2019
CelticRambler
C
critique
Infinitus Short SciFi Script Feedback
CamBlamo
Sep 20, 2019
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6
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1K
Oct 14, 2019
CamBlamo
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Ziu, the lonely andriod - Feedback on Short sci-fi drama
Jy_Bubb
Jul 2, 2019
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4
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2K
Sep 28, 2019
Jy_Bubb
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Inamorata - Short Thriller - 9 Pages
stevencwood
Jul 17, 2019
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3
Views
998
Sep 20, 2019
clark ratliff
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Post your films story here to receive feedback
GOLDENMORAL CINEMAS
Jul 15, 2019
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6
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1K
Sep 20, 2019
GOLDENMORAL CINEMAS
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"Project Dragon": Plot Feedback
Razor-D-Belphe
Sep 19, 2019
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7
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934
Sep 20, 2019
Razor-D-Belphe
R
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PRELUDIUM | Short film - Can you give your opinion?
FernandoAndre
Aug 29, 2019
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14
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1K
Aug 29, 2019
mlesemann
K
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"Young Woman by the Window"
kurtd
Jul 25, 2019
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5
Views
847
Jul 29, 2019
TheMusicBox
S
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A Change of Pace - First 10
stevencwood
Jul 16, 2019
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0
Views
979
Jul 16, 2019
stevencwood
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