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Unknown Screenwriter
Jan 11, 2021
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Jan 28, 2023
IvonV
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story
A movie script based around bland and cliche phrases
Dean Jay
Friday at 2:56 PM
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18
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374
Yesterday at 11:59 PM
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"Running Loose" (~8 pages) - These are my first pages so feedback is REALLY appreciated.
jeffthepie
Monday at 4:35 PM
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148
Monday at 7:55 PM
jeffthepie
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dialogue
Thoughts on VO narration?
ProductionBlues
Nov 13, 2022
2
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26
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Mar 17, 2023
Feutus Lapdance
story
This is taking forever
Nate North
Feb 14, 2023
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49
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Mar 11, 2023
Aspiring Mogul
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story
Throw away ideas, that can turn into a story
Dean Jay
Nov 23, 2022
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56
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3K
Mar 11, 2023
Nate North
treatment
ChatGPT - A Screenplay Treatment Experiment
Constantin
Mar 4, 2023
2
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29
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541
Mar 9, 2023
Constantin
logline
Loglines
Spike
Dec 19, 2022
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3
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53
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1K
Mar 9, 2023
Spike
misc
Any Alternatives to readthrough.com?
Chris Tempel
Mar 5, 2023
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1
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240
Mar 6, 2023
mlesemann
logline
Logline Feedback - Any suggestions to improve it are welcome ...
Constantin
Mar 4, 2023
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3
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691
Mar 4, 2023
indietalk
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I wrote story premise but I don't know if it's worth developing need critiques. ~1700 word overview of a story
jeffthepie
Feb 24, 2023
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345
Feb 28, 2023
Spike
story
High concept vs Low concept
James Rogers
Feb 12, 2023
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12
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411
Feb 15, 2023
James Rogers
misc
American Highschools
sfoster
Jan 30, 2023
2
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20
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720
Feb 3, 2023
indietalk
treatment
What I learned from the frustration of (re-)writing 2 page treatments
mlesemann
Mar 31, 2021
2
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23
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Jan 28, 2023
mlesemann
screenplay
"Pledge" Advanced for High School Directors.
JMathews
Jan 28, 2023
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0
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326
Jan 28, 2023
JMathews
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screenplay
Ideas for 5 min short
ashton.sinclair2005
Jan 19, 2023
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349
Jan 21, 2023
JMathews
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logline
Logline feedback for a drama, please and thank you
Hallucigenia
Sep 17, 2022
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1K
Jan 21, 2023
JMathews
screenplay
Humans (+1): Hope`s Heart - publishing screenplay as book
EssaHumans
Jan 19, 2023
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382
Jan 21, 2023
JMathews
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story
Crafting a Scene: Standup in a Prison Colony
Scroll Troll
Jan 17, 2023
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299
Jan 17, 2023
sfoster
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How do I make money from screenwriting? Is there a program or course I can take that tells me how to make “real money” without the fluff?
Fasterthanlight
Apr 3, 2022
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Jan 16, 2023
EssaHumans
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misc
Does anyone know of any 1960s/1970s gore/shlock film scripts online?
Hallucigenia
Jan 14, 2023
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365
Jan 15, 2023
Hallucigenia
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what is a beat in scriptwriting?
freedom crusader
Jan 9, 2023
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5
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457
Jan 13, 2023
James Rogers
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screenplay
A handful of queries sent out...
freedom crusader
Jan 11, 2023
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0
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231
Jan 11, 2023
freedom crusader
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dialogue
Dialogue and discontinuity of time
James Rogers
Jan 6, 2023
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5
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385
Jan 7, 2023
indietalk
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screenplay
negotiating payment for a script
freedom crusader
Jan 5, 2023
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2
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379
Jan 5, 2023
directorik
screenplay
"Perfect" A High School Script - Production level easy
JMathews
Jan 2, 2023
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2
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334
Jan 4, 2023
JMathews
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story
Page 1
Dean Jay
Dec 13, 2022
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14
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793
Jan 4, 2023
Iren
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story
It was all just a Dream
Nate North
Oct 25, 2022
2
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35
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1K
Jan 3, 2023
Iren
I
I
plot
Crescendo
Iren
Dec 30, 2022
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8
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454
Jan 1, 2023
Iren
I
plot
Assassin School for Girls
sfoster
Jul 3, 2020
2
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23
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Jan 1, 2023
Iren
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screenplay
How can i write scripts like this?
TalismanTales
Dec 30, 2022
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1
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394
Dec 31, 2022
Unknown Screenwriter
critique
High School Scripts “Anyone”
JMathews
Dec 28, 2022
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2
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322
Dec 28, 2022
JMathews
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critique
White Night - a short Screenplay for Feedback
Ronen
Dec 23, 2022
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10
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691
Dec 27, 2022
Ronen
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R
critique
The Time Traveler - 8-page sci-fi screenplay for feedback
Ronen
Dec 25, 2022
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1
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333
Dec 25, 2022
mlesemann
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logline
Logline for a steampunk thriller
Hallucigenia
Dec 14, 2022
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19
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807
Dec 23, 2022
freedom crusader
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misc
Why is Hollywood Ditching Its Rule of "Show, Don't Tell"?
Unknown Screenwriter
Dec 11, 2022
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10
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684
Dec 23, 2022
CelticRambler
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critique
Logline review
NormWel
Sep 30, 2022
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11
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848
Dec 22, 2022
Spike
critique
Bach in jail
Spike
Dec 11, 2022
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10
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650
Dec 16, 2022
Spike
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action
Action vs Parenthetical
Phil123456789
Aug 29, 2022
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6
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600
Nov 19, 2022
ExpatTraveler2
story
Maps of Meaning
Alcove Audio
Jul 26, 2020
2
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38
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Nov 19, 2022
ExpatTraveler2
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critique
NUBARIUM - 1/2 Hour Animated TV Pilot (Would Love Feedback!)
marcthenarc
Oct 24, 2022
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3
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579
Nov 18, 2022
James Rogers
screenplay
Chekhov's gun in the modern era
Nate North
Apr 6, 2022
2
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29
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2K
Nov 14, 2022
CelticRambler
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screenplay
Kurzdrehbuch zum Massensterben in Itaewon Südkorea (Halloween 2022)
The StoryTelLer
Nov 4, 2022
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0
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344
Nov 4, 2022
The StoryTelLer
screenplay
Rich and Poor: ist Armut Genetik? (German Screenplay)
The StoryTelLer
Oct 29, 2022
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2
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446
Nov 1, 2022
The StoryTelLer
screenplay
Halloween Screenplay ++ Black Story ++ 2 pages
The StoryTelLer
Oct 31, 2022
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0
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438
Oct 31, 2022
The StoryTelLer
screenplay
Funny little Halloween Screenplay
The StoryTelLer
Oct 26, 2022
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0
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330
Oct 26, 2022
The StoryTelLer
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critique
Talk about this scene
Dean Jay
Oct 24, 2022
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16
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571
Oct 25, 2022
Nate North
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logline
The Sunset of the Last Logline
Hallucigenia
Oct 23, 2022
Answers
1
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425
Oct 24, 2022
Nate North
critique
Short script
James Rogers
Oct 15, 2022
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18
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764
Oct 17, 2022
sfoster
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screenplay
A happy place
BMersier313
Oct 15, 2022
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3
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379
Oct 15, 2022
sfoster
screenplay
Nailbiting Horror (1 Page)
sfoster
Oct 4, 2022
Answers
5
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617
Oct 14, 2022
Unknown Screenwriter
critique
More
Spike
Sep 22, 2022
Answers
11
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943
Sep 26, 2022
Nate North
critique
WORK IN PROGRESS scripts
clark ratliff
Sep 22, 2019
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5
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83
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10K
Sep 23, 2022
Nate North
critique
The next bit.
Spike
Sep 10, 2022
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19
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951
Sep 22, 2022
Spike
P
screenplay
log line vs pitch vs synopsis vs note of intent
Phil123456789
Sep 14, 2022
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4
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557
Sep 16, 2022
mlesemann
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logline
Logline Critique, please and thank you
Hallucigenia
Sep 11, 2022
2
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20
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885
Sep 11, 2022
Hallucigenia
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H
dialogue
Repeating Parentheticals?
Hallucigenia
Sep 8, 2022
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5
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546
Sep 9, 2022
Nate North
D
screenplay
A side project
Dean Jay
Jul 12, 2022
Answers
7
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875
Aug 18, 2022
Dean Jay
D
critique
Opening scene of "A Bit."
Spike
Aug 15, 2022
Answers
9
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880
Aug 17, 2022
Nate North
D
screenplay
Blank Paper/Canvas
Dean Jay
Aug 9, 2022
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2
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617
Aug 9, 2022
Spike
treatment
The rest of the story.
Spike
Aug 9, 2022
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0
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509
Aug 9, 2022
Spike
treatment
10 Word Treatment (Horror)
indietalk
Jul 19, 2022
2
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4
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61
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2K
Jul 31, 2022
Spike
critique
A bit
Spike
Jul 26, 2022
Answers
9
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765
Jul 28, 2022
Spike
treatment
20 Word Treatment (Comedy)
indietalk
Jul 20, 2022
Answers
9
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581
Jul 20, 2022
indietalk
K
screenplay
How to - Montages with different setups/view points
krishnasarma
Jun 23, 2022
Answers
7
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679
Jul 3, 2022
mlesemann
screenplay
Serial Killer Origin Story (1 Page)
sfoster
Mar 3, 2022
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4
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2K
Jun 23, 2022
sfoster
K
screenplay
Writing GoPro shots
krishnasarma
Jun 23, 2022
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1
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499
Jun 23, 2022
mlesemann
K
screenplay
Screenplay of action scene
krishnasarma
Jun 20, 2022
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2
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527
Jun 21, 2022
krishnasarma
K
screenplay
My Bad Horror Movie Screenplay
NuttyFilms
Mar 8, 2022
Answers
5
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896
Jun 20, 2022
krishnasarma
K
screenplay
Bar scene question ...
Constantin
Apr 16, 2022
Answers
9
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1K
Jun 20, 2022
krishnasarma
K
critique
Help with an adaptation
Adeimantus
Jun 4, 2022
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13
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1K
Jun 20, 2022
krishnasarma
K
K
critique
First page of first screenplay
krishnasarma
Jan 16, 2022
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11
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2K
Jun 20, 2022
krishnasarma
K
screenplay
Murder on I-15 (Short Film Screenplay)
OneiricVisuals
May 17, 2022
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7
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926
May 20, 2022
OneiricVisuals
D
screenplay
Ridiculous movie idea - FYI / TMI
Dean Jay
May 17, 2022
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4
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697
May 18, 2022
Unknown Screenwriter
D
screenplay
Lets make a story, what do you do to make a story?
Dean Jay
Mar 15, 2022
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19
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2K
May 13, 2022
James Rogers
31 New Page-to-Screen Adaptations to Add to Your 2022 Reading List
Unknown Screenwriter
Apr 14, 2022
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3
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674
May 11, 2022
Spike
screenplay
Let's all quit writing scenes where people cock their guns
Nate North
Dec 22, 2021
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5
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1K
May 10, 2022
James Rogers
J
screenplay
Question about Entertainment Attorney
janmaxwell
Apr 28, 2022
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4
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733
May 1, 2022
Aspiring Mogul
A
J
screenplay
Question about options
janmaxwell
Apr 20, 2022
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4
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860
Apr 30, 2022
Unknown Screenwriter
story
16 Horror Movies That Ruined Everyday Activities
Unknown Screenwriter
Apr 14, 2022
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7
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842
Apr 15, 2022
sfoster
S
What are some good ways to get around the prequel problem?
Skinman
Jan 8, 2022
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13
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1K
Apr 7, 2022
Spike
screenplay
I know, but I did it anyway.
Spike
Feb 19, 2022
2
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21
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2K
Mar 23, 2022
The Lone Banana
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S
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LETHAL ATTRACTION (would like feedback on this story)
swedishdude
Nov 29, 2021
Answers
10
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2K
Mar 11, 2022
Bean Counter
P
copyright
So a major studio admitted to stealing my script...
PageBlaster
Jan 17, 2021
2
3
4
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66
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7K
Mar 9, 2022
Spike
D
screenplay
A mess of notes - organize to acts
Dean Jay
Jul 18, 2021
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15
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2K
Mar 8, 2022
Constantin
screenplay
The Saddest Painting
sfoster
Jul 17, 2021
2
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22
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2K
Mar 7, 2022
HandsomeboyRobby
screenplay
Gunshot Nightmare (1/2 page)
sfoster
Mar 3, 2022
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0
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938
Mar 3, 2022
sfoster
screenplay
Shadow Bath (1/2 page)
sfoster
Feb 27, 2022
Answers
4
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683
Feb 28, 2022
sfoster
critique
A TV show teaser.
Spike
Feb 27, 2022
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2
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1K
Feb 28, 2022
Spike
S
plot
Outline for a prequel to John Carpenter's "They Live"
Skinman
Feb 16, 2022
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14
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1K
Feb 21, 2022
Nate North
T
screenplay
Transition
tryan917
Feb 20, 2022
Answers
3
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564
Feb 20, 2022
tryan917
T
screenplay
101 Greatest Screenplays Of The 21st Century According to the WGA
Unknown Screenwriter
Jan 5, 2022
Answers
6
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935
Feb 20, 2022
indietalk
screenplay
What Stimulates Your Writing Skills and Creativity?
Bean Counter
Jan 27, 2022
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5
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1K
Feb 19, 2022
Bean Counter
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screenplay
Poor person's distribution of a script.
Dean Jay
Feb 15, 2022
2
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20
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2K
Feb 18, 2022
directorik
screenplay
Grandma's 9 Page Horror Script
sfoster
Jan 8, 2022
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12
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2K
Feb 17, 2022
Nate North
story
Sci fi Writers - What authors do you read
Nate North
Feb 15, 2022
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19
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1K
Feb 17, 2022
Nate North
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screenplay
Santa's Apperance
JohnAndrews
Dec 5, 2021
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5
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1K
Feb 17, 2022
Skinman
S
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Next Gen Old Man Thriller
sfoster
Jul 2, 2021
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5
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1K
Feb 17, 2022
Skinman
S
V
character
Unlikeable characters
verdancho
Feb 17, 2022
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1
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635
Feb 17, 2022
Skinman
S
D
screenplay
Reverse Engineering scripts - Why are only 'Intellectuals' (that isn't a bad thing) doing it when I search YT?
Dean Jay
Jan 19, 2022
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17
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2K
Feb 16, 2022
Feutus Lapdance
D
screenplay
Money for nothing... and your script for free
DDW
Feb 3, 2022
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15
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956
Feb 3, 2022
Nate North
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