Never in my life have I written a script or even practice writing one, but very soon I'm going to start my 1st screenplay for a short film titled ''Foresight''. here's the log line:
After a childhood tragedy, a boy acquires foresight, enabling him to prevent future accidents, but did he?
It may or maynot be a perfect logline but In my opinion it serves the purpose of a logline: it breifs the audience about the story. I desperately made it to be simple and not reveal anything "Important" but I found out that It's not that compelling logline to attract the masses, so I need someone to help me revise and reshape my logline so that It can fulfill the purpose of a logline while also being compelling. Besides, I promise that there is more to this logline then what it is. If anyone is willing to help me to get what I want or even suggest changes, I warmly welcome them to be my tutor. I'll provide more details about the story as we discuss..
After a childhood tragedy, a boy acquires foresight, enabling him to prevent future accidents, but did he?
It may or maynot be a perfect logline but In my opinion it serves the purpose of a logline: it breifs the audience about the story. I desperately made it to be simple and not reveal anything "Important" but I found out that It's not that compelling logline to attract the masses, so I need someone to help me revise and reshape my logline so that It can fulfill the purpose of a logline while also being compelling. Besides, I promise that there is more to this logline then what it is. If anyone is willing to help me to get what I want or even suggest changes, I warmly welcome them to be my tutor. I'll provide more details about the story as we discuss..
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