I wrote a 4 page short story that I'm trying to turn into a screenplay. So far I have just the beginning in screenplay format. Would love some opinions or pointers if you have any. The gist of the story: A lonely, sentient star sings a song that only one human can hear.
Short story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SrUg1th5n0YghnMwS5NshX5sH-yxpUw7-StX-pYO8VE/edit?usp=sharing
Screenplay: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bKP2u2x3YS6yxqZXGLixQY-_TSDxt8hSoNj1uPT7w8Q/edit?usp=sharing
(I'm not very familiar with online forums, let alone this specific one, so if I'm doing anything wrong feel free to correct me.)
Short story: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1SrUg1th5n0YghnMwS5NshX5sH-yxpUw7-StX-pYO8VE/edit?usp=sharing
Screenplay: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1bKP2u2x3YS6yxqZXGLixQY-_TSDxt8hSoNj1uPT7w8Q/edit?usp=sharing
(I'm not very familiar with online forums, let alone this specific one, so if I'm doing anything wrong feel free to correct me.)