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Screenwriting
A Q&A for all aspects of screenwriting.
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What do you think of this violent mystery thriller drama movie of mine?
Rain69
Aug 8, 2023
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The King - 15 Page Script - Feedback Appreciated
scrawlx1012
Aug 2, 2023
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Exposition.
Spike
Jul 15, 2023
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The Soft Parade (101 pgs. sci-fi/action/drama): Looking for feedback
Tnchinton3
Jun 20, 2023
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Speculative vs. Shooting Scripts: What Purpose Does Each Serve in the Filmmaking Process?
Unknown Screenwriter
May 1, 2023
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Mercury (Animated Pilot - 25 Pages) (Would love feedback - first attempt at trying to really write this year)
scrawlx1012
Apr 5, 2023
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"Pledge" Advanced for High School Directors.
JMathews
Jan 28, 2023
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A handful of queries sent out...
freedom crusader
Jan 11, 2023
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Kurzdrehbuch zum Massensterben in Itaewon Südkorea (Halloween 2022)
The StoryTelLer
Nov 4, 2022
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Halloween Screenplay ++ Black Story ++ 2 pages
The StoryTelLer
Oct 31, 2022
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Oct 31, 2022
The StoryTelLer
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Funny little Halloween Screenplay
The StoryTelLer
Oct 26, 2022
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Oct 26, 2022
The StoryTelLer
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The rest of the story.
Spike
Aug 9, 2022
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Spike
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Gunshot Nightmare (1/2 page)
sfoster
Mar 3, 2022
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logline
Have you ever tried to make your logline NFT?
Yu-Chen
Jan 24, 2022
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Critique for a new HORROR movie outline - INNER SANCTUM
Constantin
Nov 30, 2021
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Nov 30, 2021
Constantin
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Thought those of you writing specs might find this interesting...
Unknown Screenwriter
Nov 8, 2021
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Unknown Screenwriter
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Spec Scripts for Save Point
Nate North
Oct 23, 2021
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I wrote my first short film script, I NEED Critiques!
willtryit
Oct 4, 2021
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Untitled 1930s Lovecraftian/mystery/horror/comedy web episode. 10 pages
Outside
Aug 13, 2021
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guywhowrites27
May 1, 2021
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American Star (Drama, Full Length)
robert-timsah
Apr 28, 2021
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Apr 28, 2021
robert-timsah
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Feedback Addiction
robert-timsah
Apr 28, 2021
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‘Toy Story 3’ Screenwriter Michael Arndt Teaches How To Write A Pixar Movie In This Free 70-Minute Lecture
Unknown Screenwriter
Apr 3, 2021
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Unknown Screenwriter
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First 10 pages
greenboard
Mar 13, 2021
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Mar 13, 2021
greenboard
The Inaugural Peter Roth TV Intern Program
geckopelli
Feb 27, 2021
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Glad indietalk is still here
ChandraJeet
Feb 5, 2021
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Old school writing lessons
Unknown Screenwriter
Oct 2, 2020
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Oct 2, 2020
Unknown Screenwriter
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Overused Storylines: Film and Screenwriting Industry in Danger of Turning Into Corporate Machines
Unknown Screenwriter
Oct 2, 2020
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Oct 2, 2020
Unknown Screenwriter
Charlie Kaufman...
Unknown Screenwriter
Jul 4, 2020
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The Guardian Angel Scene Money Heist
Alex Pina
May 26, 2020
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Need review on pilot of my new series
hustlebuslte
May 13, 2020
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Screencraft Quarterfinalist?
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May 7, 2020
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A Change of Pace - First 10
stevencwood
Jul 16, 2019
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Gunel
Feb 7, 2019
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Feb 7, 2019
Gunel
Is it a good idea I post my new writings to learn English thinking?
mstasg
Oct 24, 2018
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Oct 24, 2018
mstasg
My Last Part Of The Movie!! Is it nice?Have you any idea?
mstasg
Oct 12, 2018
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Oct 12, 2018
mstasg
Screenplay analysis
Panos
Sep 26, 2018
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Panos
Fast Track Your First Draft Screenwriting Course
ShoreScripts
Jun 11, 2018
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critique what I have so for
rahmed3
May 19, 2018
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rahmed3
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Sophia - Scene
MarkTheSecond
May 13, 2018
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May 13, 2018
MarkTheSecond
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American Savior Short (Would Love Feedback)
Firm1
Mar 30, 2018
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How to Create Tension
ThinkStory
Mar 1, 2018
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ThinkStory
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Thoughts On Rooting Interest! (Aki!)
AAAslan
Feb 20, 2018
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AAAslan
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Thoughts On Wounds! (Aki!)
AAAslan
Feb 20, 2018
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AAAslan
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Star Wars & How to Create Character Arcs
ThinkStory
Feb 17, 2018
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ThinkStory
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Feedback Request - To Be Remembered (Short drama, 8 pages)
stevencwood
Oct 18, 2017
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New Here, Wanted to Share some Shorts
stevencwood
Oct 5, 2017
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The Forgotten Battle (87 pages) "Final Draft"
Blase29
Sep 21, 2017
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Feedback Request - Attack of the 1985 Chicago Bears (feature film - comedy)
Rodney
Sep 6, 2017
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Rodney
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Can anyone give me a review for my feature screenplay?
andrewriter
Aug 13, 2017
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andrewriter
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My Cousin Vinny / Parker Posey - Austin Film Festival On Story Podcast
AFFOnStory
Aug 3, 2017
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Aug 3, 2017
AFFOnStory
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I am planning to move to Dubai...
nobody
Jun 16, 2017
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Jun 16, 2017
nobody
Eros and Psyche: Story beats
Krios
Apr 28, 2017
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Please check out my Fantasy TV Pilot
Gregory Mandarano
Apr 16, 2017
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Converting stage play into screen play
thegringo
Mar 23, 2017
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Black Fire Burning Outline
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Mar 21, 2017
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FEEDBACK REQUEST - "Dr. Kaufman Act One" (Indie Meta Comedy) First 43 Pgs
chromekid
Mar 18, 2017
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Feedback request-Sing to Me (6 pages)
adejuwonder
Mar 16, 2017
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adejuwonder
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Looking for feedback-Sunsets & Time Travel (13 pg)
adejuwonder
Mar 16, 2017
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What do you think of this short film script?
harmonica44
Jan 12, 2017
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(feedback) New Drama Series - "Shift of Powers" (teaster) first 7 Pages.
mpimentel
Jan 3, 2017
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Article - WHAT REALLY MAKES PEOPLE (AND CHARACTERS) ‘BAD’ OR ‘EVIL' Part 1
JohnatWriteMovies
Nov 9, 2016
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I've been cheating on you, IT.
Cracker Funk
Sep 15, 2016
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Cracker Funk
35 OSCAR, BAFTA, Golden Globe, Cannes & Emmy Award Winning Judges
ShoreScripts
Aug 30, 2016
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ShoreScripts
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C.C.I fantasy script
joey1986
Aug 28, 2016
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Aug 28, 2016
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Writing a Mockumentary vs Film
derek smith
Aug 12, 2016
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Aug 12, 2016
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Dialectical Story Structure
Niss
Jul 1, 2016
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I'm writing this screenplay and would really like some feedback on it.
kid_filmmaker
Jun 24, 2016
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kid_filmmaker
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My new e-book, How to Sell Your Screenplay, is now available.
tcawood
Jun 19, 2016
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tcawood
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A script to test that I can keep to the concept and characters...
GalaxySquidQueen
Jun 14, 2016
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GalaxySquidQueen
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My first screenplay I wrote 8 years ago: Bruised Apples
JLol777
May 28, 2016
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May 28, 2016
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Scriptwriting critique for criteque
Rich0
May 17, 2016
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May 17, 2016
Rich0
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Looking for a "Monster Movie" script to turn into an Audio Drama
Cole McLeod
May 14, 2016
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Cole McLeod
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"The Kung Fu Rock Chick" needs Notes
Kung Fu Fan
May 13, 2016
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Kung Fu Fan
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MICRO SHORT film - Need Feedback
mauricenash
May 11, 2016
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mauricenash
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Update on the 2016 Shore Scripts Screenwriting Competition
ShoreScripts
Apr 30, 2016
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Apr 30, 2016
ShoreScripts
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New Festival Competition
Brux
Mar 25, 2016
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Mar 25, 2016
Brux
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Is there anything I can do to get around this audio recording law for my plot?
Filman
Mar 19, 2016
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Mar 19, 2016
Filman
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Need To Bounce Ideas Off for 5-7min Short Film Screenplay
CarsonC
Feb 17, 2016
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Feb 17, 2016
CarsonC
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2016 Shore Scripts Competitions & Short Film Fund
ShoreScripts
Feb 5, 2016
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Feb 5, 2016
ShoreScripts
Please read, this is my longest ever partly written script, do you love?
nobody
Feb 2, 2016
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Final Draft users.
webshark
Jan 22, 2016
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Jan 22, 2016
webshark
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How to find a good script editor on a budget.
RonderPradhan
Jan 15, 2016
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Free Screenwriting Calendar for 2016
ScriptReaderPro
Jan 13, 2016
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Jan 13, 2016
ScriptReaderPro
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Writing a Treatment for a TV Special
Nunlimited
Jan 7, 2016
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Nunlimited
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Synopsis vs Narrative - Whats the story
derek smith
Jan 6, 2016
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derek smith
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about anything native Americans
Grin
Dec 21, 2015
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Dec 21, 2015
Grin
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Feedback on my first script for a short, please? (7 pages)
TamTam
Dec 20, 2015
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Final Draft - Merging ScriptNotes
NHoobler
Dec 4, 2015
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NHoobler
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JUST GIRLS: Quick Feedback Needed, Shooting Soon
candidiva
Nov 15, 2015
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Nov 15, 2015
candidiva
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Screenplay Structure with the Mini Movie Method
Jabu Studio
Nov 10, 2015
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Jabu Studio
Semi-Finalist Announcement!
ShoreScripts
Nov 5, 2015
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768
Nov 5, 2015
ShoreScripts
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Quick translation job for $20
Elmore
Nov 2, 2015
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Nov 2, 2015
Elmore
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I have some plots and parts of film. I show some here. Please tell me how good am I?
nobody
Oct 31, 2015
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Oct 31, 2015
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Some Sage Advice from an Exec from ICM
JoeyTuccio
Oct 22, 2015
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Oct 22, 2015
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Celtx
Alien X
Oct 14, 2015
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Which approach for this type of ending for a thriller sounds more plausible?
harmonica44
Oct 12, 2015
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James Bond Screenplay Set In The Mood Of BBC Sherlock
Andreas77
Oct 11, 2015
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Does this ending make sense, or is my villain too 'stupid'?
harmonica44
Sep 27, 2015
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I have a question
Alien X
Sep 27, 2015
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