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[Constantin]

Twin Fate

Separated at birth, twin brothers from vastly different worlds escape their oppressive upbringing and, by fate, reunite on the streets of New York. Together, they embark on a perilous journey to find their birth mother while evading those from their troubled past who threaten to tear them apart.

 

[Constantin]

Now the mob angle works too. Can totally see it in a webcomic. Next time tell us!

Actually, the idea is to get exposure through webtoons, with the hope it get some attention and possibly gets picked up as a movie.
This happened with a few titles already

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[indietalk]

Sounds good. They can be a little more over-the-top than a movie so Italian mob boss works. Sounds like a great idea.