Sophia - Scene

This is a scene,I guess, that I wrote the other day. I honestly don't think it's that great. It's definitely not the best thing I've written. This is like maybe my third time doing it? I only finished the second one. The pacing, I feel, is too fast. This is really just something I thought would be cool, but it's a story necessarily. I had some more stuff to add to it, but I don't know if I'll actually do it. Yeah, just let me know what you think.
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