"Janice says you would be a great fit at her office. and in a few years you'll have money of your own to invest"Wait who was Janice again?
Well I'm gonna show a picture of janice and vlad together so they wont recognize her for sure.Oh okay. FYI it might not be remembered in the end title. I think it would have to be mentioned in the end to tie it in, like when he talks about the money as they make up. "So Janice won't be seeing me in the office!" She laughs..
well I did think about just going all in and saying he becomes the first dog to defy medical science and live foreverHow about that pic and the title something like:
"And Vlad filled the open position with Janice. He was a great fit."
Something like that ties it in.
i think your idea is good just needs to be broken down into two parts. gotta have the setup before the punchlineYou have time to figure it all out it does not affect picture lock.
I don't want to sound mean, but you don't wanna know ;( Guess it's not my kind of film.If you start watching and get bored - stop watching! and then tell me when you stopped so I can make that part more exciting.
I don't want to sound mean, but you don't wanna know ;( Guess it's not my kind of film.
It all depends on what you're trying to achieve with this film.
On my second run as a director, I felt like the script wasn't up to scratch but others convinced me it was ready to shoot. I didn't have the confidence to put my foot down. We ended up shoting a romcom that was quivering dull mess. We spent way more time in post production trying to polish it than the film was worth. We ended up improving it in the edit, but the amount of work it took to improve it wasn't worth it. It was far from being a decent film in the end. You can only edit so much. It was a good learning experience. That's about it.
Sorry about the sidetrack with that story of mine. In the end, you'll have to decide for yourself whether you're in the ballpark of being happy with it. If you are, then little touchups is what you're looking for. I'd suggest tightening up the edit. Trim the fat. Trim, trim, trim. Trying laying down some temp music/fx to see how it feels and go from there. If that doesn't work, look below:
I don't know what coverage you have, but if you're thinking it's not working/dull, you'll need to rewrite (either with a reshoot or rewrite in post) to get it there.
Honestly you don't really need to explain the uber and the car. Since you're doing time pass titles you could simply say "20 minutes later" and just cut to him driving up to the bag, and our minds will connect the dots.what do you think ?