Ok, so I finished my first cut of "Antihero" and overall, I like it. Needless to say, there are issues, though.
One problem I'm seeing is that some of the scenes need seperation from each other. The majority of this movie is two dudes getting into shenanigans. Although each scene definitely works on it's own, they still butt up against each other a little too much. My initial plan was just to seperate them by establishing shots of whatever location they are at.
Last night, the thought crossed my mind to use chapters, with title-cards. Though I didn't write it or shoot it with this in mind, it might actually fit.
My question is if anybody has any alternative ideas? Other than with establishing shots or chapter titles, any ideas for how to create a little more seperation?
Note: re-shoots are not feasibly possible.
Thanks.
One problem I'm seeing is that some of the scenes need seperation from each other. The majority of this movie is two dudes getting into shenanigans. Although each scene definitely works on it's own, they still butt up against each other a little too much. My initial plan was just to seperate them by establishing shots of whatever location they are at.
Last night, the thought crossed my mind to use chapters, with title-cards. Though I didn't write it or shoot it with this in mind, it might actually fit.
My question is if anybody has any alternative ideas? Other than with establishing shots or chapter titles, any ideas for how to create a little more seperation?
Note: re-shoots are not feasibly possible.
Thanks.