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  1. Zaco32

    Burning Faith Screenplay

    Hello. I posted an earlier version of this. I've added more and made a lot of improvements. I just wanted some feedback. Thanks! LOGLINE: A young man defends his Grandfather from his deranged brother who has been blinded by his faith...
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    Burning Faith-Screenplay Feedback Wanted

    Hey guys, This is my most recent screenplay I wrote with my girlfriend. This is our first draft and we are just look for some constructive criticism. Thank you! https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ZT0_jEa6uoKXWYvqQm8Wh071fjrp6gdDYbiqDa5jkJw/edit?usp=sharing
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    Screenshots From Upcoming Film

    Here are some screen shots of a film I am working on. I will post more as the production continues. This is the first film I am doing where I have some knowledge of cinematography. I just wanted to share. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5.
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    Recreating a Train Light

    Hey guys. I've been trying to think of a way to recreate the spot light on front of a train. The only catch is that it needs to be battery operated. This light will be far away when it is in the film so it does not need to be anything fancy, just bright. Does anybody have a good source for a...
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    Feedback on Lighting/Cinematography Wanted

    Hey guys, It's been awhile since I've posted anything on here but a couple of nights ago I wanted to do some lighting tests. This is one of my first real attempts to create something with a film vibe to it. This is what came of it. So please, any constructive criticism is appreciated. I am...
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    Police Lights?

    Anyone have a idea as to where I can buy a set of police siren lights that are cheap and very bright? I'm not looking for official police lights or anything like that. Just something cheap that will get the job done.
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    Does a Mystery Script Need an Interrogation?

    Hi everyone. I have a few questions regarding my first screenplay. I'm having trouble writing an entertaining interrogation scene and having the script come full circle. As of right now I am using flashbacks but I'm not sure if I want to go that way. I'm not much of a mystery writer but I...
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    New Screenplay-Julia-Feedback

    Hey guys. I made a thread a couple of weeks ago about my screenplay I wrote for a short film that I wanted to make. After getting a lot of great constructive criticism and spending a lot of time on it, I wanted to post my final draft. I wrote this to what I will actually be able to film...
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    Feedback wanted on new script

    Feedback on new script-LINK FIXED Hey guys! I'd like some feed back on my new script. I'm not worried about the format of it but there are some obvious weak points that I'd like some help with. So thank you for taking the time to read it! The link should be fixed. Sorry about that. New in...
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    watch Missing-Mystery/Suspense

    Hey everyone! I'm proud to show you my first attempt at a short film. So please check it out! It doesn't have an ending. I know, I know, that's a very important but I hated how the end came out. I want to show off all the other hard work I put into it though...
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    Sony Cyber-shot DSC-HX10V help

    So, I bought this camera because I'm on a budget. My girlfriend also wanted to start vlogging and at 300 bucks, it was a good deal. It takes great pictures and has a good video. But there is one thing that it doesn't do, or I just cant figure out. Basically, I want to know if there is a way to...
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    How to not let the narration ruin the short?

    I figured out my story and unfortunately there won't be any dialogue. It will have to be done with a narration. A lot of videos with narrations have ruined it for me. I don't want to fall into the same thing. I just want to know tips on how to let it not be the death of my short. The main...
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    I need help on an Idea

    The way ideas come to me is through seeing them as clips, as if it is already a movie. I liked this one idea that I got but I wanted to see if you guys could help me build off of it. Basically, what I have so far is, a boy around the age of 18 is watching a home video with his father in it...
  14. Zaco32

    500 to spend, looking for a good dslr camera

    I need help on finding a good dslr camera the records HD video for under 500 bucks. Any advice on what dslrs I should be looking at?
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    Sony Handycam HDR-CX110

    Sony Handycam HDR-CX110 Is this a good camera for the price? I am a beginner but I don't want that to affect my image quality. So, is it worth it?
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    So, I went to do some test angles...

    It did not go as planned. I couldn't get the angles to look as they do in my head. This is my first short film so it also is bumming me out. Any advice?
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    Any festivals that take screenplays?

    Are there any festivals like this?
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