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When one character is talking to a specific character within a group. How is that done?
On another forum it was suggested to be done like this.

John

(to jake)

What are you drinking?

That seems awkward and like too many spaces to me.

Appreciate any advice
sfoster
Oh a motorcycle guy :) I used to have a yamaha fz6 a few years back but it gets so cold in the winter and none of my friends rode.
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(CONT'D)

I happen to know it like the back of my hand... I love it when there's a herd of Elk in the middle of the highway and the factory riders are picking their way through them and I just motor past... They try to keep up but their FEAR just won't let them keep up.
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After 20 or so miles, I'll stop at one of those previously mentioned stores, get something to drink. Eventually, the factory riders -- outfit on full factory rides complete with leathers -- pull in and buy a drink too. We all park next to each other and they check my bike out very closely. It's just an old Buell XB12R Firebolt with a race kit.
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It's fast but not as fast as their bikes. But for the Gila? It's like they built the damn thing JUST for riding it.

We all sit around and drink sodas... Eventually upgrade to beer and people begin to tell me HOW FUCKING CRAZY I AM.

Love it. That's the way I wanna go to be honest.
sfoster
Who greenlit peppermint? LOL Jennifer Garner as an action hero has been a joke since elektra.
J
Have any of you ever had to indicate that a character is looking through a peephole? I just put PEEPHOLE POV., and then described whats happening on the other side of the door. Is there a better way?

Sorry if you've seen this question already. Still learning how to use the site.
mlesemann
Finishing the outline for a feature screenplay - first time I've been hired to write a horror. I'm enjoying it more than I expected :)
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The Holiday is one of my favorite movies, even though in some ways it's 2 movies stapled together :)
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Alcove Audio
That's what I like about "The Holiday," the contrasts and similarities between the two women. Meyers perspective make it fresh. And that's what appeals to me.

My favorite love story, however, is the one between Iris and Arthur, who helps her to heal, then she in turn helps to heal Arthur.
mlesemann
mlesemann
Yes! Absolutely - the love story between Iris & Arthur is wonderful, especially since I've always liked Eli Wallach.
sfoster
Amazon had 1 "used - very good condition" $600 haze machine listed at $175! It will be mine, oh yes... it will be mine.
sfoster
Standup comedy i keep going on at the very end of the night after the audience all goes home. and I perform for the 1-2 alcoholics left at the end of the night. But damn I'm getting good at it. This time the two people both gave me hugs at the end and said I was the funniest mother fucker.
sfoster
When did quentin tarantino become david carradine ?
I was curious if he ever got married and found this pic. turned out he is relatively recently married.

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sfoster
sfoster
yeah he must be using some of those celebrity anti-aging secrets. looks great for mid 50s
indietalk
indietalk
If he's done work it's not noticeable, looks "gracefully" but also he has a more badass look then he used to, the natural skunk hairdo is working. ;)
sfoster
sfoster
that badass look is because he is becoming david carradine lol
mlesemann
I'm really tickled that my friend Tara Westwood stars in The Grudge re-boot, out this weekend. She was great in a supporting role in my 1st feature, Surviving Family, & both starred in & produced Detours with me.
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