She's missing a finger! (I hope at least one person gets that reference)
There's a dancing gorilla that moonwalks from left to right when it should be left to right.
Haha. I love that video. And I totally didn't catch the moonwalking gorilla.
Anyway, back on subject, sinner, the lighting is pretty bad. And it's particularly jarring when you change setups. I think a lot of people will give me flack for what I'm about to say, but I think it's better to do less. If you had a real cinematographer, somebody who really knows what they're doing, and you've got a crew to effectively impliment everything that needs to get done, then I believe it is normal for every shot to be a new setup.
However, based on posts I've read from you in the past, I believe you're pretty much going this alone, aren't you? Or, if you have a crew, it's ridiculously small, no? I know all about those kind of productions, and it's my strong belief that if you don't have a real crew, the production does not benefit by you trying to do everything. You can't effectively be a cinematographer and a director at the same time, unless you and your cast have unlimited time on your hands.
So, with that in mind, I think in small-time productions like this it's better to have a 1:1 location:setup ratio. Maybe you can make small changes between shots, but nothing too significant. When you've got a thousand things on your brain, it's too easy to let one (or several) thing(s) slip.