If you can point me to an example I'll be glad to help.
Here are a few examples that I've seen. It's terrible how people always feel the need to attack others instead of helping them or offering real solutions.
The fact that you think you could execute your project to perfection just by getting your funding is the very fact why most of those who know anything about filmmaking would not donate, because we know it takes a lot of skill and experience to even execute a project well, let alone to perfection. So, the fact that you think you could execute your project to perfection just given the funding, is a very strong indicator that you wouldn't even execute it well!
I saw what you call a line item budget. It tells me you do
not have the knowledge and experience to manage half a million
dollars.
You have a really bad thumbnail image on your page that wouldn't get 3 thousand.
You need to have images that are a lot more polished and professional if you're asking for 7 figures.
it's not going to happen, you need to pay your dues and put in the ground work to develop your abilities before expecting anyone to back you financially.
you say it was unnecessarily rude. It looks to me like it wasn't rude enough because the message did not get through!! You are wasting your time.
If you thought that was rude, it's pretty clear you haven't crossed my path yet.
I'm going to give my honest opinion, as I don't think it's worth giving anything else..
Your alien really isn't convincing at all. It's a cheap Halloween mask and a spray painting overall.