What an amazing short film my friend! You gave some great insight and really stunned me with the visuals you pulled off. It must have been amazing to create this short and see it completed. The Timelapse, gopro footage and drone shots really worked well together. Keep it up so we can see more from you.
My only feedback I can think to give would be to slightly lower the music when the narration is over it. It wasn’t bad i could still hear it but towards the end it got a tad noticeable. These small things we gloss over can change a viewers perception of the project entirely and in worse cases cause them to click off even though it’s a great film. Not because they don’t like the project but because these small details creep into the viewers subconscious and cause a spark of “unprofessional stigma” within. That then turns into “I like this but there’s something slightly better out there.”
So always keep mind of these things and think what might have been overlooked. That’s all I can think of though I loved it!