Another advertisement, who wants to be in it folks?

[Papertwinproductions]

Here comes a regular, callin' out your name.

EDIT:

So, to save those newcomers to the thread, alot has changed. It's now concerning two submissions from ourselves, and Wheatgrinder.

Wheatgrinders Submission.
http://www.poptent.net/media/20730

Papertwinproductions Submission

http://www.poptent.net/media/24382

 

[wheatgrinder]

you can if you want. its submitted and I'm done with this sucka .. movin on.. though Im waiting to see PTP's submission.. wazup?

 

[Papertwinproductions]

Poptent are swamped, as soon as the submission is accepted i'll post the link.

It's a "Curve ball", just so you know...

 

[Papertwinproductions]

Here it is, the first of two drafts.

http://www.poptent.net/media/24382

00:09 - 00:11 seconds will be cut, for the final submission.

 

[wheatgrinder]

oh my heck, that is funny! Im still laughing..

 

[Papertwinproductions]

Do you agree on the cutting of the two shots between 00:09-00:11 seconds, Wheat?

 

[NickClapper]

Just, for the record, I'm going to say that I think both of the ads on this thread are really, really good and I wouldn't be terribly surprised if one of you two won the competition.

 

[Papertwinproductions]

Just, for the record, I'm going to say that I think both of the ads on this thread are really, really good and I wouldn't be terribly surprised if one of you two won the competition.

Cheers, Clapper.

We've just reposted the new edit, i believe, even it is stated as "Pending", it's viewable.

http://www.poptent.net/media/24382

 

[wheatgrinder]

ah.. I just saw your updated version.. much tighter it was the right thing..

FYI:
rev one here: http://www.poptent.net/media/24382/1
rev two here http://www.poptent.net/media/24382/2

I think you could also cut the wide shot at 5: .... your still a bit over 10: right?

 

[Papertwinproductions]

ah.. I just saw your updated version.. much tighter it was the right thing..

FYI:
rev one here: http://www.poptent.net/media/24382/1
rev two here http://www.poptent.net/media/24382/2

I think you could also cut the wide shot at 5: .... your still a bit over 10: right?

Thanks, Wheat.

However, our Foley guy is unavailable, we managed to cut the two shots because there was a gap in the audio. I'm not favourable of the shot in question, either. It takes me out of it.

Deadline is upon us, Wheat. Excited?

Also, the second version is "Pending", yet viewable. I wonder why?

 

[Buddy Greenfield]

Nice.

-Thanks-

 

[Papertwinproductions]

Nice.

-Thanks-

Thanks, Bud.

 

[Cracker Funk]

Cheers, Clapper.

We've just reposted the new edit, i believe, even it is stated as "Pending", it's viewable.

http://www.poptent.net/media/24382

 

[Papertwinproductions]

I did say it's a curve ball

I'm glad you appreciate it, Cracker!

 

[Buddy Greenfield]

That is just crazy enough to win.

(But win or lose I love that you didn't play it safe.)

Good luck to both of you guys.

-Thanks-

 

[Papertwinproductions]

That is just crazy enough to win.

(But win or lose I love that you didn't play it safe.)

Good luck to both of you guys.

-Thanks-

I researched their previous commericials, I'm hoping there is some leighway. So here's to fingers crossed for the both of us!

Salute!

 

[wheatgrinder]

There some fun commercials there. Stiff competition.

 

[Dreadylocks]

Nice one paper! I LOLed. I especially love the little mustache.

What was the point of the raw chicken? Is it just because chickens and comedy go so well together?

 

[Papertwinproductions]

There some fun commercials there. Stiff competition.

Most definitely. Have any of the other assignments caught your eye yet?

 

[Papertwinproductions]

Nice one paper! I LOLed. I especially love the little mustache.

What was the point of the raw chicken? Is it just because chickens and comedy go so well together?

It was a "Ham"...



Slapping the ham...

I'm supposed to be British, innuendo is not my forte...

 

[Dreadylocks]

It was a "Ham"...



Slapping the ham...

I'm supposed to be British, innuendo is not my forte...

Wait? So is that a masturbation joke?