treatment 10 Word Treatment (Horror)

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An internet game where we create a story in treatment form with 10 words per post, no back-to-back posting.

Genre: Horror

Setting: 1990s Louisiana backwoods.

I'll start!

The sun casts a golden light over the bayou. A...

 

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, to Randall "Mom's gonna kill you!" Gator: "Too late haaa!"

 

[Spike]

Meanwhile, in his secret laboratory beneath the Eiffel Tower, Professor

 

[mlesemann]

Dubois adds a tiny amount of liquid to a beaker

 

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which smokes. "Ha HA!" A tiny alligator the size of a

 

[mlesemann]

pin emerges from the smoke and crawls onto the counter

 

[Spike]

"My child," Dubois cackles. "My lovely little reptilian child." Meanwhile,

 

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back in Louisiana, Randall is turning back into human form

 

[mlesemann]

Gator pukes all over his new sneakers as he watches

 

[Nate North]

As the transformation completes, Gator rushes over to him. "Are

 

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you OK?" Randall nods. "Hungry as fuck." Gator thinks. "Pizza?"

 

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Randall: "I'm a mutant gator not a mutant turtle!" Laughter.

 

[Spike]

"Dude, look what I found." On wooden debris, a postmark:

 

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Jeremy: "Paris? Dubois something... Louisiana experiment—OW! (drops cratewood) it's HOT!"

 

[Spike]

Gator: "Where's that country?" "It's a city, moron, in France."

 

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"So are we the experiment?" Suddenly, the original creature appears

 

[Spike]

They freeze. "And," Gator stammers, "What country is France in?"

 

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Meanwhile, back in the lab under the Eiffel tower, "A-ha!"!

 

[Spike]

Dubois holds the tiny gator. Wonderous! And then is bitten!

 

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"Mon dieu! No, the radioactive saliva must not penetrate!" Suddenly

 

[Spike]

he collapses. The reptile stares, as his nose . . . grows. Meanwhile,