treatment 10 Word Treatment (Horror)

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An internet game where we create a story in treatment form with 10 words per post, no back-to-back posting.

Genre: Horror

Setting: 1990s Louisiana backwoods.

I'll start!

The sun casts a golden light over the bayou. A...

 

[mlesemann]

"Is she naked? I think I see a boob!"

 

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Gator yells back "Who cares, it's a fucking gator girl!"

 

[mlesemann]

Jeremy gets up in his face - "It's my first so I care!"

 

[Nate North]

Randall watched from the safety of the truck, filming the

 

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drama unfold when he was spotted by the creature. Suddenly

 

[IvonV]

its eyes flashed red, and Randall felt a sharp pain

 

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—her hands in a choke formation, he gasped for air

 

[mlesemann]

as his eyes bulged and his face turned bright red

 

[IvonV]

The boys suddenly notice Randall as he gasps for air

 

[mlesemann]

But the creature's "choking" hands are 10 feet from him

 

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Smoke fills the cab and Gator and Jeremy run toward

 

[mlesemann]

the truck as Randall stops filming & drops the camera

 

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The truck explodes, they are blown back. "Noooooo!" Gator cries

 

[mlesemann]

as he grabs Jeremy just inches from the flaming wreckage

 

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A gator-skinned creature resembling Randall walks from the flames, chuckling

 

[IvonV]

Gator: "you still want to check out gator girl boobies?"

 

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"The fuck?! My brother's a fucking gator zombie you asshole!"

 

[mlesemann]

"So now you're prejudiced against gator zombies? Dude, it's 2022!"

 

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Randall, in gator form, jumps from out of nowhere "Rahrrrrrr!"

 

[Nate North]

They could hear sirens approaching, Probably the crashed plane. Jeremy