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    R.I.P. Roger Ebert

    I just received a breaking news email alert that Roger Ebert has passed away. I tried to get on the Chicago Sun Times site, though it never loaded so this is all that I was able to get http://www.mediaite.com/online/legendary-film-critic-roger-ebert-dead-at-70/
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    When What You Wanted to Happen Doesn't

    Here's a nice little write-up from a local newspaper on a new Lifetime Movie (I know, I know...). The director/producer has some good advice and provides an interesting look at how she got her film made, albeit not the way she initially wanted...
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    Scene Feedback

    Good afternoon all, I was inspired by a scene and wonder if you all will read and give me your thoughts on it. What do you all think - is it too dark? Flat? Do you find the subtle humor? Too much dialogue? And my apologies for the format, I am still learning how to post using this code...
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    The Torn Dress - for Kinglis - Feedback Request

    Good morning all, Kinglis apparently challenged me to write a short entitled, The Torn Dress. Well, here is a link to the 10 page shortthat I came up with. It is set to share with anyone with the link, so there shouldn't be any issues accessing it, though in the even that there are, please...
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    The Funeral - Feedback Requested

    Good evening all, I am wondering if you all will be so kind to give my short a read and provide me some feedback? It's a quick read at seven pages and not much dialogue at all. Logline: A guy deals with the loss of a loved one. Here is the link...
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    Last Call - Feedback Request Part Deux

    Hello all, I am wondering if you all will be so kind as to read and provide some feedback on what I have of my script so far. I believe that I have the format nailed down (used MS Word template) though I am sure there are some grammatical errors and possibly some spelling errors. Also, it's...
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    Last Call - Feedback Request

    Good evening all, After a long bout of writer's block I finally started back on writing and I am wondering if you all will be kind enough to provide me some feedback on what I have so far. I am writing a full-length murder/mystery set in Houston, TX that I am hoping that I can direct myself...
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    Feedback?

    Good afternoon all, I am wondeirng if anyone would be interested in reading what I have so far to give me some feedback? I really don't know of a site to post it at and would be more than happy to send a PDF. Please let me know. Thanks, Adam.
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    Opening Scene

    Good evening all, I am wondering if you all have any idea if there is a "rule" or a standard amount of time for the opening scene to be prior to the Title/Opening Credit Sequence? The reason why I am wondering is the initial part where I want to have the opening credits appear is pretty far...
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    Formatting Question

    Good afternoon all, I am currently stuck on how to format a particular section of my screenplay and I am wondering if you all might be able to help me out. In this section of the script, I have multiple groups of characters in different bars, clubs and restaurants from one another. Is it...
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    Howdy

    Hey y'all. I'm obviously a newbie on here. A little about myself: I'm a 31 year old male from Houston, TX who just started to write again after a decade long layoff. I am currently working on my first screenplay and have found the challenge to be fun as hell. Anyways, I wanted to say hi to...
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