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    The Problem with dark humour

    @FeatusLapdance I don‘t forget it. I‘m just too busy at the moment. #School‘n‘test
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    The Problem with dark humour

    The film Death became her was on TV yesterday evening. And I’ve to say… gosh! I lay on the ground by all these funny jokes. Ok. It was pretty dark humour. But hey! It was GOOD dark humour. So, now my question is: Why do modern films sucks when they use dark humour? And how can I create jokes...
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    I tried a new script; please, critique it

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/mn6enrzzmf8fhd6/Ghost%20in%20the%20house.pdf?dl=0
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    I wrote another script; please, critique it

    @Panos Diners do still exist. Especially, these days, where people do look for something like these to feel younger. I just say Teen memories. Even in Germany, they do still exist.
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    I wrote another script; please, critique it

    I wrote another short film script. https://www.dropbox.com/s/dhtvade71z4x2ap/a%20pretty%20face%20means%20no%20pretty%20heart.pdf?dl=0 Please, critique it.
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    Plot problem because of topic

    Alcove Audio. Yeah, I know about that topic a little bit. At least because many classmates, I had, had such problems like bad families, depression, etc. Many of them made it to the best thing. However, many other ones used it to get attention. They were such bold and kissed the teacher's ass...
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    Plot problem because of topic

    Hi, guys! I’m working on a superhero project. It’s about teens, whose parents are superheroes. Those kids go together to a high school. (I know I told a lot about this.) But I can’t always tell about the teen’s problems. That’d be more a telenovela. Am I right? And I can’t let them fight at the...
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    Critique my screenplay try

    @indietalk I did it. And you see: it didn't work.
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    Critique my screenplay try

    Thanks. @pedramyz Please, do it via PM, can you?
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    Critique my screenplay try

    @pedramyz that sucks. I try to find a converter
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    Critique my screenplay try

    @everyone I made it new. Here's it as a PDF: https://www.dropbox.com/s/l5io43cw9rt3q7v/You%E2%80%99re%20fired.pdf?dl=0
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    Critique my screenplay try

    English ain't my first language @pedramyz
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    Critique my screenplay try

    https://www.dropbox.com/s/khmhbvr4aif4ehp/You%E2%80%99re%20fired.celtx?dl=0
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    Villains

    So, how does the interview help with my problem?
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    Villains

    Yes. Joker is the opposite of Batman. It's like Van Helsing and Dracula. One is kinda an Angel and one is a blood-drinking demon.
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