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    logline confusion

    So many logline ideas seem to revolve around a decision between A and B. A decision is not action. A kidnapped warrior TRIES TO ESCAPE from his honorable captor without being imprisoned by his power-hungry father.
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    Any suggestions?

    Think 'scene' not movie and you'll have it.
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    What do you guys think?

    Fight Club: It starts with a guy with a gun in his mouth and goes back to all that led to that point.
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    Suggest me a logline please

    A viral infection stands between a man and redemption.
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    Think I feel a script idea coming on...

    Here's the article I mentioned... Tuesday, Aug. 24, 2010 Kin of dead man face pension fraud rap Kyodo News A pension association has filed a criminal complaint against relatives of a Tokyo man found dead at his home last month on suspicion of fraudulently receiving payments he would have...
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    Love is Online (2nd draft)

    Any movies that show proprietary programs (like YouTube or Facebook) have gained the permission of the owners. I guess it's OK as long as you ask their permission (and perhaps pay them.) To avoid all that shit, just make up a social network name - like 'friendchat' or 'matenet'. I don't know...
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    Logline - Is it: Good? Okay? Bad? Terrible?

    I get what you're saying. I really do. But, you have to get your grammar in line to be taken seriously. Anyway, let me try to paraphrase what my understanding of your story is. There's a guy. His father was a terrorist. He didn't know his father was a terrorist. This guy lives in a 'big...
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    Think I feel a script idea coming on...

    I live in Japan and can tell you that the real story here is that they suspect that there may be hundreds of cases of people who have failed to report the death of aged family members in order to continue collecting pension money. The first incident was discovered when the government went to...
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    Love is Online (2nd draft)

    Random thought for you; I like the story, but i have a hard time imagining how it will hold interest as a film, seeing as most of it is two people sitting in front of a computer, typing messages. I like the montages and restaurant scenes, because the characters are doing something. Maybe it's...
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    Almost halfway and I need some feedback

    Sorry for the hassle everyone. I had the privacy settings wrong. Anyway, please try the following... https://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B8IjRKGeV9lIMTQ0ZGNlMzUtYjE1OC00N2M5LTkxOTYtNDg5ZmMyM2YyNzUz&hl=en
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    Logline - Is it: Good? Okay? Bad? Terrible?

    All of these loglines are wwwwwaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyy too long. Try to keep them one line long (They are called logLINEs for a reason. Also you use adjectives in odd ways... people or societies can be corrupt or declined NOT futures. What is a DECLARED terrorist? Do you mean a notorious...
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    Logline - Is it: Good? Okay? Bad? Terrible?

    "In a paranoid science fiction world dominated by government controlled surveillance, a son of a declared late terrorist is contacted by a self declared freedom group, who makes him questioning the truth about his father, the world he lives in and even his reason to exist." In a declining...
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    Almost halfway and I need some feedback

    Really? The link seems to work OK for me. Please try again. I would love to attach it, but the site doesn't allow that. Try this one...
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    Aspiring Canadian Screenwriter living in Japan

    Sorry Zen, Wish that was me! I do mostly commercial stuff, and a few character voices for Cd-Roms, also some radio and TV news.
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    Aspiring Canadian Screenwriter living in Japan

    Hi there; I am an English teacher (Masters in Linguistics) who has owned his own school in Japan for 12 years. Oh yeah, I've also done voice narration for about 10 years. Great forum. Hope to exhange ideas with ya'll. Looks like a great bunch of people. FADE OUT Brian
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