I've got 45 pages so far and feel I'm on to something, but I'd like some input.
There are a couple of typos in there which I found after converting the file to pdf from Final Draft format, so please excuse them (pgs. 34 and 38, I think.) I'm pretty secure about format, and am really eager to hear if the story is paced well, the dialog rings true and the narrative has a voice, but I welcome ANY comments at all.
Please go to
http://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B8IjRKGeV9lIMmVhZmJiNGItNzkzNC00MzI2LTk3NTctY2RmYjgyMGNiNzk2&hl=en
Thanks in advance,
There are a couple of typos in there which I found after converting the file to pdf from Final Draft format, so please excuse them (pgs. 34 and 38, I think.) I'm pretty secure about format, and am really eager to hear if the story is paced well, the dialog rings true and the narrative has a voice, but I welcome ANY comments at all.
Please go to
http://docs.google.com/fileview?id=0B8IjRKGeV9lIMmVhZmJiNGItNzkzNC00MzI2LTk3NTctY2RmYjgyMGNiNzk2&hl=en
Thanks in advance,