There are also couple of things i would like to add: i'm on page 25, it means that i just spent 25 minutes in front of the screen watching the film you wrote, and there is nothing really happening. Normally, i would expect to be introduced to main character and understand character's desires and goals. And then i looked at number of pages in your script. Is it 243 pages? It's like a four hours long film. The best advice i can give you is to write a really short synopsis, like one-two pages, and tell us a whole story using that two pages. Then you write a script using core elements of your story from the synopsis you wrote and keep your script up to 90-100 pages.