Hey guys, here is yet another screenplay I recently wrote. It's feature length but please review the first 10 pages.
https://www.scribd.com/document/357212532/Bastard-Sample
https://www.scribd.com/document/357212532/Bastard-Sample
Do you think there would be enough action if the fight at the beginning had more detail?Interesting intro... not a whole lot happening, but you do introduce Max and Nathan.
For extra brownie points, condense the first 10 pages and include more action and thoroughly introduce your main characters.
Do you think there would be enough action if the fight at the beginning had more detail?
Maybe if each kid was doing something interesting in the fight that says something about their personality/character?