Please Review My Screenplay

[Quality]

Hey guys, here is yet another screenplay I recently wrote. It's feature length but please review the first 10 pages.

https://www.scribd.com/document/357212532/Bastard-Sample

 

[Feutus Lapdance]

The friendship feels real... the only thing I doubt is this part

MR. COLEMANThat is none of your business, youngster. I’m sure Nathan’s parents have legitimate documents stating that they are the biological parents.2.

I doubt a teacher would say the second sentence.

 

[Quality]

Principal* I was more thinking that he stated it because he wanted them to get off his back about the issue so they would stop fighting and coming in his office.