Nice Job. Looks Like broadcast tv quality footage. Color is good.
You went a little far with the transparent overlays, didn't hit the crowd enough, and some of the flag shots where not framed perfectly. Close up shots of the face as cutaways would help with interest.
I understand that you probably didn't have a second cameraman on the field, and were probably using a prime lens or something, so in general, great work, that was handled well.