archived-videos my short clip i made

[Timi]

First of all hi im new here My name is Tim im Russian but live in Worcester UK

this is my first ever edit that i have edited and filmed myself
sorry for a crappy quality my camera is not that great getting a Canon Legria not sure about a model yet tho in 2 or 3 months tho
so can you please watch it in 480 p its a bit sharper : )

critique is really welcome
tell me whats good and what could be improved what YOU personaly liked and disliked

thanks for all the future feed back guys i really appreciate it : )


and here is the edit it self : )

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8MSFkVCY5Ks

 

[Dreadylocks]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8MSFkVCY5Ks

Nice shoes.

I'm not sure what you wanted critiqued. It just looked like a camera test to me.

 

[Ernest Worthing]

welcome!

advice: focus, smoother pans, clean lens.

 

[Timi]

Nice shoes.

I'm not sure what you wanted critiqued. It just looked like a camera test to me.

nope like what do you think about it what could be improved and no it wasnt a camera test took me 2 hours to do that but i ve enjoed it

 

[Timi]

welcome!

advice: focus, smoother pans, clean lens.

thanks man

 

[Zensteve]

The pans were pretty jerky.

Aside from that, I dunno. I don't "get" most experimental film, so if you say this is more than just a camera test I'll simply take your word for it.

 

[Murdock]

The pans were pretty jerky.

Aside from that, I dunno. I don't "get" most experimental film, so if you say this is more than just a camera test I'll simply take your word for it.

Its obviously about a slightly chubby 6th grader that wants to go out for the basketball team, but is afraid to because he just summoned the nerve to ask the cutest chick in class out on a date after doing the coolest synchronized dance number, with random people, and doesnt want to embarrass himself by not making the team.....clean the lense.