logline LA Bites

james 04

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LA Bites, after moving from New Orleans to LA - an unconventional Family try to adjust to their new City. A Mother is accompanied by her son DeShawn a small-time drug dealer and his girlfriend Raven. They find a Doberman that becomes a loyal part of the family after DeShawn is murdered by rivals. The now changed Doberman is out for revenge and hunts them down one by one at night in this bloody tail of voodoo and horror one bite at a time.
 

indietalk

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First off it is too long for a logline. And storywise, the doberman is out killing people and we are supposed to support this because he is avenging a drug dealer's death? That doesn't work for me.
 

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