editing Knock Down Sequence

[wheatgrinder]

Hi all,
I filmed and edited this last night as a test for some shooting I hope to do this weekend. Its a big knock down sequence at the end of a fight. Id like to know if it "works." (its NOT supposed to look "realistic" rather I'm going for over the top, super kung-fu thing.. with untrained kids!")

I shot this like it was a dialog, with OTS's. In post I did some time remaps etc, some of those fx's are a bit off. Sorry 'bout the "over the top" color, it was late and I just slapped a look on it.



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[wheatgrinder]

Here is the sequence with music I recorded last night, and first pass sound FX's

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