Okay so craigslist also turned up no real leads so I've put my sonor maple drum set, double bass pedal and everything up for sale for $1000.
If I can unload that I'll send out another casting call with the funds. Obviously $300 was not cutting it, no one even asked to read the script.
Wow! Holy cow. Sorry, man. I hope it at least does the trick.
I'm curious about your casting calls:
what did you write?
Maybe IT can polish it a bit
I was wondering the same thing.
Please don't take any critique I make personally. And I applaud your courage in posting these and putting them up for "assessment."
First and foremost, note that it's not like I have my thumb on the pulse of the psychology of your typical model looking for work via MM (or Craigslist or wherever).
I like your first casting call better. It comes off as more professional. The second seems too "needy," perhaps.
(But again, what the hell do I know what's going to appeal to a model/actress?)
(I'm trying to put myself in the shoes of a model looking at your casting call, by the way, among other things.)
So I see the two day commitment. That might trouble me. Maybe I have a crappy day job working as a waitress or whatever. It might be tough getting off of work for two or more days. And am I going to need a hotel? What's that going to cost? Or maybe late august/early September is about when I'm going to be getting ready to go back to school.
Maybe the more hefty pay day
will solve that hang-up.
I don't think I like the last paragraph, except for the first statement. If you really do want people who have auditioned for you before, I might keep it simpler and more direct, like: I encourage those who have auditioned for me before to audition for me again. I hope there's a more elegant way to put it than that, but I mean something simple, to the point, and like you really mean it.
I would probably not use the word "proposition" in a casting call like this in any context, especially not as a verb.
And I believe I would inxnay that entire last statement.
I would think it might be helpful to offer any serious inquirer the opportunity to read the script, also. Or at least it might be helpful to give a synopsis or explain the premise.
"This is a very serious project to me, I'm changing my body composition by 90lbs throughout filming!" might come off as "a little too much information," as they say, in a casting call. She probably just wants to know you're the guy in charge, who's calling the shots, and who knows what he's doing. Tales of your extreme dieting, or any extreme behavior, might be off-putting.
My feeling is that the second casting call might be something you lay on 'em in subsequent emails or over the phone once they show interest or they are in. I feel like it may be too casual, which might make you sound unprofessional.
When it does come to putting that selling spin on your project, I think you or we might want to include something about it being fun, creative, and meaningful. Fun and working creatively together seem to be recurring ideals expressed by different models whose profiles or casting calls I've read.
But boy, I may be way off base in my
opinions. Again, I am not a filmmaker and have zero experience with this stuff. So the above is highly speculative on my part. I've never written a casting call in my life. What would really help is if I saw multiple examples of successful casting calls in order to make intelligent judgements.
So it would be really great and I'd also really like to hear what Walter and others with real experience think, or how
they do it.