I'm trying to add montage shots from two perspectives. Is this a right way of doing so?
In other place I have this. At a traffic signal Rajesh was waiting for signal. Meanwhile, some past events flash in his memory.
Rajesh hangs up the phone and slides it back into his pocket. He rushes back to the bike and picks up the helmet, laying on the bike’s mirror.
BEGIN MONTAGE:
QUICK CUTS:
IN THE MIRROR OF RAJESH’S BIKE:
-- Fastens the helmet.
-- Slips on the driving glasses.
ON THE MAIN FRAME:
-- Turns ON the bike key and the lights on the digital meters glow.
-- Pulls the clutch
-- Shifts the gear.
-- Raises the accelerator.
-- Looks sideways.
END MONTAGE
VROOM! VROOM! VROOM! The bike jump starts with a thick cloud of smoke.
In other place I have this. At a traffic signal Rajesh was waiting for signal. Meanwhile, some past events flash in his memory.
The screen should return to the original scene after hearing the honks. How to write it in correct way?QUICK FLASHES:
-- Rajesh's father struggle to breath on the bed.
-- A doctor checks the father and throw a peril looks at Rajesh.
BACK TO SCENE
Honks of vehicles pull back Rajesh. He accelerates the bike.