Hey, gals and guys! For my graduation ceremony, I wrote a screenplay for a short movie. I have shown it, my teacher, already. But he and the other students of my class mean, “That’s unfunny!”. This is a big problem because it shall be funny. Well, I want to ask you if you like to help me. It has to be comedy one! However, comedy isn’t my genre. How can I create a funnier screenplay by this one? Here is the screenplay: https://www.dropbox.com/s/j4lcq9e1299qdz2/Sparetire- Titanic.pdf?dl=0
P.S.: Sparetire: a mix of "spare" and "satire". But I also need a better title.
P.S.: Sparetire: a mix of "spare" and "satire". But I also need a better title.