archived-videos "Goody Two Shoes" winner CAmm Slamm 2010

PlaskettForest · Oct 17, 2010

This is my Seussian short dark comedy that won the CAmm Slamm 2010 48-hour film project competition in Baltimore, Maryland, 10/10/10. Hope you enjoy it. Feedback is welcomed!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vys3v_cyf1U&hd=1

gooberman · Oct 17, 2010

Reminded me of dr.suess. It was good.

PlaskettForest · Oct 17, 2010

gooberman said:
Reminded me of dr.suess. It was good.

Yes, Dr. Seuss was part of the inspiration. The original script I wrote did not rhyme at all, bu this idea just hit me and I was much more pleased with it after I added the rhyme.

Thanks!

gooberman · Oct 17, 2010

her shcool project at the end looked like a screenplay.

Buddy Greenfield · Oct 17, 2010

Sweet and demented. (I enjoyed it.)

-Thanks-

PlaskettForest · Oct 17, 2010

Buddy Greenfield said:
Sweet and demented. (I enjoyed it.)

-Thanks-

Appreciate it. Thanks.

PlaskettForest · Oct 17, 2010

gooberman said:
her shcool project at the end looked like a screenplay.

I'll never tell.

Murdock · Oct 18, 2010

The dialogue needs to be more sing-songy if you're going to use a lymrical rhyme style. Pretty cool.