Yes it was very good!
Editing and music are great.
Acting was great too, the girl talks a little fast/slurs her words in the bedroom/checking for monsters scene.
I would have liked a little more "room tone" in some of it, it was a little too empty/studio sounding at times.
Agree with the TV sound... and... the popcorn had no popping sound, and Mikey falling to the ground, that sound effect was off.
But you asked for critique, I thought it was pretty awesome.