watch Dark Regrets - 2010 - Short Film made in Whangarei, NZ. (Youtube Video)

[grudgeproductions]

Dark Regrets​

Filmed in 1080p HD and edited with Premiere Pro CS3 and Sony Vegas 8 Pro
Music done with Reason 4.0

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fwWiAFlv31o
Cant See it there? See it here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fwWiAFlv31o

Directed/Edited/Orginal Music and Camera by: Alex Gilbert (Thats Me)

Staring: Angus McKay, Leon Budgen , Gemma Vine ,Alex Gilbert and AJ Thompson

Special Effects and Make Up: Mig Alves

Set Help: Melissa Marsh ,Liam Eady, Adrian Moss and Jared Gilbert

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[Buddy Greenfield]

It has its lot of various problems, but I’m sure you’ll get those sorted out in time. I guess the important thing is you made a multi-character story on the outside of the 10- 15 minute mark.

A script with more direct and purposeful (less dramatic) lines of dialogue that takes place in and around a single setting (Like murder at a party or something) where you could have a plan in place for each of your shots might work well for you guys, but points for trying the drama.

-Thanks-

 

[grudgeproductions]

thanks for the feedback ,will keep that in mind

 

[dainbreadfilms]

too much noise in your audio. I couldn't understand what was going on.

 

[Zensteve]

I stopped watching about 8 minutes into it. It's just ponderous.

I wish I had something more constructive to add.

 

[L.I.F.E.]

Your accents make it impossible for me to understand anything except expletives . I stopped watching after about 20 seconds.

 

[onix]

lost interest at 2mins

 

[Cracker Funk]

Damn, you guys are harsh. Your loss for not watching the whole thing. I thought it was pretty good.

Of course, there's a lot of stuff that could be improved upon, but hey, that's what we're at this forum for, right?

A lot of those edits just didn't cut together very well. I'd work on continuity between shots, and get more coverage.

And wow, that's an awful lot of walking you made me watch. Cut that out.

Nice work, and good luck on your next production!

 

[Ernest Worthing]

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[Cracker Funk]

Ok, fine, I'll say it. Have you guys taken into consideration the probable age-range of the filmmaker? Do you think it's likely that this is one of his first projects? We all started somewhere.

Constructive criticism might be of more use. Be honest, yeah, but damn, do you really just have to shoot him down, without at least a little bit of encouragement?

Keep working on it, grudge. And buy this book:

http://www.amazon.com/Bare-Bones-Camera-Course-Video/dp/0960371818