I have a musician that I'm going to work with in a couple weeks - I'll start with the trailer.I like the impact of #1. It could be a tadddddd tighter, like buying the gun, maybe some jump cuts, when the guy opens the gun box you actually here a "tap tap"on the table, and then again. It would be nice to score the trailer, music really ties it all together.
#2 is okay. Needs music. VERY dry when the old man speaks and the bird noise in the beginning is way too high. And it's "SAFE" deposit box not safety. So that one irks me.
I really like #1. A hair tighter, music, boom! Cool!
This was really insightful.#2 VERY dry when the old man speaks