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archived-videos Coercion - Trailer

Hey..

Shot of film is cool. But it looks like you did not spend much time lighting. Maybe thats just the look your going for. It feels a bit sterile..

Very retro, the sound track is particularly interesting in that regard.
 
Thanks for the feedback. I was really inspired by Alien in terms of the cinematography as well as some early German Expressionism so I was kind of going for that low-key lighting. Your sterility comment was interesting. What caused you to think that?
 
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