archived-videos CHECK OUT THE SECOND TRAILER FOR A PLAYAS WEB

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WHATS UP INDIE WORLD AM BACK WITH THE SECOND TRAILER FOR A PLAYAS WEB. PLEASE CHECK IT OUT ENJOY IT . LET ME KNOW WHATS UP..CHECK YOU GUYS LATER. HERE IS THE LINK http://youtu.be/Q--tYQHPIAo



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[Phil_UK]

Could do with more colour grading and less caps lock

 

[PaulGriffith]

"ANNOUNCER VOICE: In a world where every letter is capitalized..."

Seriously though, not bad. Would like to hear an announcer's voice in place of titles, or better titles. Looks like a fun movie.

 

[rockerrockstar]

The acting and camera work looks great. The concept is interesting too. The begining I thought it was a comedy but the sound tones at the end of the trailer made me question my assumptions because it seemed almost a horror type tone. I think if you change the tone at then end it would make the trailer better because I thought the scene where he was tied up was funny but the music did not match that.

I agree the titles and stuff could be updated to match the quality of the video footage you have the bold face upper case letters all Caps as they say above does not work well. A voice over in the beggining to announce the trailer could be good too as said in the above post.