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Okay, I have an idea in mind, it's a bit crazy but maybe that makes it original. A gay man has been obsessed with his soccer idol for fifteen years. He even decorated his studio with posters. He cannot be with another man, his life is about his soccer idol. One day his best female friend walks...

I decided to open a new topic on this. In general my writing is a bit non-realistic but one of my scripts is really over the top. It's about a team of doctors starting a private hospital and making as many people as possible believe they're seriously mentally ill. In the final act for instance...

A few people critiqued my work so far and most reviews were like: it's good but you have to add emotions or make a plot more interesting ( or try to love your characters) I don't know how to work this out. If someone would tell me: add this word or that line, it was be easy to work with. It...

First of all sorry about the formatting. I've been copying from celtx. This is a short one scene movie on how an undercover agent arrests a life coach not paying taxes. It's the type of lifecoach telling everyone the same shit like: you're wonderful, you're great,..... INT. ALiCE's OFFICE -...

I started using Celtx last week and though it looks good when using celtx, it's impossible to copy it and keep the format I was using. It turns out to be a bunch of words and I don't think the purpose of that software is not being able to copy it.

As I've posted here: http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?p=390679#post390679 I'm looking for people helping me to develop my drafts. I've been writing 5 drafts so far: 1) two strangers ( the guy is a dreamer, a poet, the girl is the opposite but they do attack) being stuck in a boring...

The thing is: I write good stories, have been writing five drafts and I do know I can come up with good plots and dialogues but I don't feel it when I have to describe actions. I've had screenwriting lessons at drama school and most of the time I got 95 percent for having created a good story...

Here are the first five pages of a script I've written ( okay I'll still call it a draft). I copied it from my word document which means the style doesn't look perfect. So far my main focus have been dialogues and character development. INTO THE MOON By S.K. FADE IN: INT. LIVING ROOM -...

I'm about to finish my 5th draft for a movie ( all 90 minutes +) . I have just written the story, the dialogues and I'm sure I still need to learn how to make it more professional before I actually introduce them to pro's. So the question is: what kind of advice would you give me?

Hey, my name is Stef. I live in Belgium. I studied drama and I've been involved in music but at this very moment I want to explore the world of screenwriting. I've been writing 5 drafts for movies but of course there is still room for improvement and that's why I'm here. To develop some skills...