A few people critiqued my work so far and most reviews were like: it's good but you have to add emotions or make a plot more interesting ( or try to love your characters) I don't know how to work this out. If someone would tell me: add this word or that line, it was be easy to work with.
It feels like I would need someone sitting next to me and go through each page to see how I could change it. I could spend months on trying to change it myself but then it could be even worse because I don't really get the point.
It's more like: I can write but I also seem to be very good at putting scenes and sketches together. I'm not really that superb at moving a story forward ( or at least not in a ninety minutes movie)
It feels like I would need someone sitting next to me and go through each page to see how I could change it. I could spend months on trying to change it myself but then it could be even worse because I don't really get the point.
It's more like: I can write but I also seem to be very good at putting scenes and sketches together. I'm not really that superb at moving a story forward ( or at least not in a ninety minutes movie)