As I've posted here: http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?p=390679#post390679 I'm looking for people helping me to develop my drafts.
I've been writing 5 drafts so far:
1) two strangers ( the guy is a dreamer, a poet, the girl is the opposite but they do attack) being stuck in a boring relationship wait for their partners at a desert parking place near a wood. As they both learn about the fact that they'll have to wait a few more hours, they start chatting and have this instant click they've never felt in their relationship. They decide to spend the next hours together, meet an old lady having been stuck in same kind of situation. She recommends them to follow their heart. They both thought these were the most mindblowing and most fascinating hours ever but in the end they decide to get back to their normal lives but do make a promise to come back to the same place in sixty years.
And then the final part of the movie would be a look back on how they lived with regrets...
2) A young man thinks it's strange that too many people commit suicide at the same place in a wood. He decides to investigate it. He founds out all those people saw the same crazy psychiatrist. On his way to the truth he meets a lot of fascinating but deranged people messing with his brain but eventually he finds out those dead people aren't really dead but they're hiding somewhere....
3) two 35 yr women have been best friends since highschool. One of them became a succesful lawyer, perfect husband, perfect child,....the other one is still single and has blown all her relationships so far. To compensate this, she's developped a relationship with her sex toys, she even talks to them.
When she falls in love with a man, her best friend tries to do anything to ruin it but then he actually leaves her to start a gay relationship with her best friend's husband. The perfect lady becomes a mental wreck, she's losing her selfcontrol and it turns out that the perfect image has just been a cover up for everything in her life
4) a parody on psychiatry, very flat characters, more like: a bunch of sketches put together. Friends having read this draft thought they were reading a south park script. It starts with greedy shrinks hiring nurses to promote their hospital to people in the streets
5) I still have to translate this one, but it's about a couple in their thirties being tired of not being wealthy so they decide to pay for diet supplement coaching courses. They get fascinated with gurus and sell almost everything they have to develop their own business. Those promises turn out to be lies from manipulators and once they realize it's all a big scam, it's too late. When their daughter gets sick, they stayed away from doctors because those guru types said they could offer the perfect alternative.
I've been writing 5 drafts so far:
1) two strangers ( the guy is a dreamer, a poet, the girl is the opposite but they do attack) being stuck in a boring relationship wait for their partners at a desert parking place near a wood. As they both learn about the fact that they'll have to wait a few more hours, they start chatting and have this instant click they've never felt in their relationship. They decide to spend the next hours together, meet an old lady having been stuck in same kind of situation. She recommends them to follow their heart. They both thought these were the most mindblowing and most fascinating hours ever but in the end they decide to get back to their normal lives but do make a promise to come back to the same place in sixty years.
And then the final part of the movie would be a look back on how they lived with regrets...
2) A young man thinks it's strange that too many people commit suicide at the same place in a wood. He decides to investigate it. He founds out all those people saw the same crazy psychiatrist. On his way to the truth he meets a lot of fascinating but deranged people messing with his brain but eventually he finds out those dead people aren't really dead but they're hiding somewhere....
3) two 35 yr women have been best friends since highschool. One of them became a succesful lawyer, perfect husband, perfect child,....the other one is still single and has blown all her relationships so far. To compensate this, she's developped a relationship with her sex toys, she even talks to them.
When she falls in love with a man, her best friend tries to do anything to ruin it but then he actually leaves her to start a gay relationship with her best friend's husband. The perfect lady becomes a mental wreck, she's losing her selfcontrol and it turns out that the perfect image has just been a cover up for everything in her life
4) a parody on psychiatry, very flat characters, more like: a bunch of sketches put together. Friends having read this draft thought they were reading a south park script. It starts with greedy shrinks hiring nurses to promote their hospital to people in the streets
5) I still have to translate this one, but it's about a couple in their thirties being tired of not being wealthy so they decide to pay for diet supplement coaching courses. They get fascinated with gurus and sell almost everything they have to develop their own business. Those promises turn out to be lies from manipulators and once they realize it's all a big scam, it's too late. When their daughter gets sick, they stayed away from doctors because those guru types said they could offer the perfect alternative.
