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Haha I know it's just that this was kind of embarrassing. I'm not apologizing for it but I am trying to distance myself from it. The concept is more open ended. Yeah chess would be a good example.

Thanks for the complement and the advice. I usually don't use foul language as a tactic but more as a realistic form of speech. None the less I saw your point completely and changes have been made :)

Please become famous and make major motion pictures you're a genius. That is all.

This is in no way an example of my work in essence. This was something I did in two days with a four to three hour schedule per day with a budget of 0 dollars and 0 cents. I was also limited in location to only one room. It's also the first thing I ever made so it's pretty bad. Check it out and...

I believe it man. Eventually I'll get the rules straight, my goal right now is to finish my writing the way I want, then go back and make it suitable to market. I get what you're saying dude and I agree. I'm not in the business of making everybody happy as far as story and dialogue go but I...

Thank you dude, finally some constructive criticism. That's an interesting idea, sounds like the Stage Manager in Our Town. I can see where you'd criticize the script there. It's a lot of swearing in short bursts, I got a filthy mouth and I need to restrain that to a degree. It certainly needs...

Hey I didn't point fingers man and I didn't say anyone called me racist. I welcome criticism with open arms, but no one ever said I had to agree with it. Like I said I'm not even entertaining the notion one word out of a whole page being inappropriate. Not even gonna do it. If there are rules to...

Look I'm not even gonna waste my time with the notion that I'm racist or my writing is racist. That's quite simply retarded. I'm well aware that Tarantino perfected his dialogue, but to consider it a waste of time to emulate his writing is kind of absurd. Like all this racist banter is getting...

Negro isn't the N word N------ is. It was me taking artistic license with my writing not me attempting to be racist. It's a matter of contexts too. If I had said "big lipped" or "big nosed" or "filthy" that sh-- would be racist. An honestly cracker I'd use the word cracker if it sounded right in...

Haha since when did negro become racist? What I gotta put Afro American on everything now? Jesus Christ, only bat sh-- crazy black people would ever consider negro racist. That's just from my experience. I just think it's sad that your kinda right lol.

That second shot needs to be cut just a bit faster. Other than that it looks very cool my dude. Personally it doesn't look like your trying to do anything new with the genre but I like that you're contributing to it. The last trailer was what I was referencing of course, your other stuff was a...

Haha in fact if it helps my appeal I'll change the word N----- to negro. I don't really see the huge difference but to each his own

I don't find the N word offensive. It's a matter of context. If the president got on TV and said the n word forty four times until it didn't mean anything anymore it wouldn't be seen in such distaste(preachy). I'm sorry I offended you, really. I kinda had to give the back story cause it plays...

Chew food while you act. Add a scene where your eating. It makes you appear to be a better actor and you seem more natural. Trust me on this one. Advice on how to make this work: make it funny, but not jokey funny. Try doing something like "You Got the Touch" in Boogie Nights. I like...

Intro to a new story I want to tell. I was lookin' for some feedback. I'ma try an finish this thing by summer. I gotta great soundtrack line up that I have in mind. Tell me what you thought...

Thanks man! That's like just what I was looking for an I totally dig what your sayin' about art. I think the most intimate moments you can share in characterization is when the character is in their down time. I was kinda going on that for some of those sequences, but yeah something does need to...

I was just looking for ideas, anything that could be interesting to add in a 1950's drug dealer's first person flick. Like a character that could come in. The addition of a brother? Themes of emptiness in drug abuse and how to apply them? Criticisms about what I'm doing incorrectly. I'm not...

Well look at Martin Scorsese's work. He said (jokingly of course) the only movie he ever made with a plot was The Departed. And I did finish the zombie one but I was just kinda having fun with it and trashed it. Jean-Luc Godard's Breathless has little active plot going on as well. I don't like a...

Hello I wrote this with a lot of ideas in mind but no kinetic plot, I kinda wanted to do something like Taxi Driver's plot structure. I'm looking for things to add in between the time the script reaches 1962. Keep in mind this is HIGHLY under developed, but I like it. If you can leave me some...

I love the idea of Mark tapping his brace and making some kind of quick remark. That sounds like good stuff. However I'd rather leave in the bit where Mark doesn't check the guns and asks Sonny, this shows a sign of trust. Friendship is about trust and I think that very simply and clearly...