Now if the brothers hook up in a bar - get into a fight and their worlds unravel/deterioates as the night goes as they struggle all over town with various characters/incidents until they come to the point where they aill KILL each-other BUT put there guns away and grow enough to fight together...
I believe I've advised you before but in case I haven't - triggerstreet.com is the best place for you.
Buy Trottiers Screen Bible for format - sit in a chair for a month and write it.
All the best, Jim.
1. Buy a dictaphone
2. Unleash your best sp into the recorder.
3. Find someone to transcribe to sp format.
You are now a writer!
All the very best, Jim.
Take him off the credits - change the name of the project - prob won't even know.
If he does let him 'prove' he shot it.
If all else fails, I know someone who knows someone... ;-0
How about you tell him that because you're doing it together you'll give him a "co-direted by" credit - all the best 50% is better than 0% especially, if he walks and at all comes to a halt.
Put it down to experience and carry on 'learning' - all the best, Jim.
H44, place your love interest somewhere 'early' to be paid off later, whichever way you choose BUT if you can add some irony in doing, which relates directly with your theme - fantastic!
Adhere to a basic 3 / 4 act structure until you have a greater understanding of the craft - which only comes...