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    Script: Precognition (Feedback Needed)

    FantasySciFi, I'm speechless :woohoo: I don't know what to say about your posts, I think you are the number 1 reason why I'm come to this forum. I noticed whenever you write something, it is absolutely priceless. I'm still reading your post, but I wanted to give you a quick thanks for the huge...
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    Script: Precognition (Feedback Needed)

    Okay I'm back ... I hope I made it better. I followed your tips about the formatting. :rolleyes: Click below and you will view it right a way. Title: Cheating Death...
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    Script: Precognition (Feedback Needed)

    I ignored the format somehow, I focused more on the story. I tried to add twits here and there to make it more entertainment. It's fine to fail as this is my first try. At least now I know the format was wrong and I need to fix my writings. English is a second language, I'm still limited...
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    Script: Precognition (Feedback Needed)

    Script: Feelings Edit: I updated the script, go down to my third post. Hey Guys, :rolleyes: Possible Titles: (Precognition, The Predication, or Feelings). I'm open for suggestions. SYNOPSIS: Safaa hallucinates about bad things happening to his friend that end up happening for real. Could...
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    Canon HF 100 Fight Scene Best Lens?

    If I'm making a fight scene with Canon HF 100, what lens adapter would you recommend to buy? Edit: I think I posted this in the wrong section.
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    watch Wheatgrinder's March IT Challenge: cinematography

    Very well made, looks amazing to me.
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    watch Fight Scene (Second Attempt)

    Thanks to people like you who left good feedback on my first attempt :cool:
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    watch Fight Scene (Second Attempt)

    Yes, I broke the 180-rule this time, but I will follow it on next projects. I thought it won't be a big deal if actors have different colors, but thanks for the call :D
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    watch Fight Scene (Second Attempt)

    This is my second attempt to make a fight scene, it's very short. I'm still learning, so i need good feedback. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jQS0QJ_WtqQ If you still didn't see my first attempt check out this thread ... http://www.indietalk.com/showthread.php?t=29861
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    watch Fight Scene Test (Short)

    Very beautiful feedback from all of you guys, knightly you have a great vision, your right about adding more sound effects in the playground to make it more believable. I will try different sound effects, stretch both axises next time and I hope for better results. I appreciated those feedback...
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    watch Fight Scene Test (Short)

    I think I have seen almost every Chinese movie from 2007 till now with Eng subtitles. I just love the realism in their movies, they always grab my emotions quickly than any western style. Hollywood style is more like faking the scene, that's why I don't get too emotional. Even the theme is weak...
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    watch Fight Scene Test (Short)

    oOh sorry :rolleyes:
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    watch Fight Scene Test (Short)

    I fixed the link to the video , I thought it was my laptop not showing it properly. Thanks! :D
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    watch Fight Scene Test (Short)

    It's pretty hard to achieve something great quickly as a beginner, I think most of us can agree on this. I shot this with some friends, it's suppose to be an action film, but I didn't get that feeling. My friends are untrained, normal people with average fighting skills. I tried to follow the...
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    Copyright Question - Rocky Music

    I really love you guys, thank you for those wonderful comments. This forum has great members, I'm glad I'm here. You see those two songs could have caused me troubles, now all I have to do is change them to something else. Very easy solution, Thanks again!
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